for Splitting Leaves, Flying Shadows6/14/2024 c26 monroehcampbell
Suddenly a giant meteor hit hit the ground. Every living thing on the planet was killed within minutes.
The End
Suddenly a giant meteor hit hit the ground. Every living thing on the planet was killed within minutes.
The End
5/15/2023 c5 
13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Wow, that was excessive in how the handled being found by a boy. And one that was already there. Kurenai is a raging ***** over something outside her control.
13N7 Greek-ValkyrieWow, that was excessive in how the handled being found by a boy. And one that was already there. Kurenai is a raging ***** over something outside her control.
12/5/2022 c26 Deleetteedd123
I remember reading this when it first came out and thinking how great and original it was, still is, but I think there is so much that could have made it better. First and foremost, is the absolutely cringe all caps dialoigue yelling and "comedic relief". In the beginning with Sarutobi and Kushina talking with Naruto. It's so jarring and comes across as forced. It continues on throughout the story and it tears any credence of seriousness this story could have and throws it away. If this us meant to be humor/crack-fic, you shouldn't have wasted such an amazing original concept of the Narutoverse with those genres.
I remember reading this when it first came out and thinking how great and original it was, still is, but I think there is so much that could have made it better. First and foremost, is the absolutely cringe all caps dialoigue yelling and "comedic relief". In the beginning with Sarutobi and Kushina talking with Naruto. It's so jarring and comes across as forced. It continues on throughout the story and it tears any credence of seriousness this story could have and throws it away. If this us meant to be humor/crack-fic, you shouldn't have wasted such an amazing original concept of the Narutoverse with those genres.
8/19/2018 c7 Arsenal
The fanfic description gave me so much promise. But then I started to read the story and I was dumbfounded. I find it very irritating that Naruto is weak. I despise a weak Naruto in fanfic stories. If I wanted a weak Naruto I'd just watch the canon anime. Fanfic is supposed to give me more than canon, so for Naruto to be even weaker than he was in canon, with his body breaking down, is a step in the wrong direction.
The fanfic description gave me so much promise. But then I started to read the story and I was dumbfounded. I find it very irritating that Naruto is weak. I despise a weak Naruto in fanfic stories. If I wanted a weak Naruto I'd just watch the canon anime. Fanfic is supposed to give me more than canon, so for Naruto to be even weaker than he was in canon, with his body breaking down, is a step in the wrong direction.
4/11/2017 c1 OMG S.I.N
Please dont just please dont
if you are wondering what that means it means do not say discontinued if you cannot avoid using the word then say it with an apology and say it sincerely like "Im very sorry to everyone who liked to read this but it is with a painful heart that this is discontinued"
You ARE WRITERS NEVER let anyone get to you just because of a small flame be strong and correct your errors!~
Please dont just please dont
if you are wondering what that means it means do not say discontinued if you cannot avoid using the word then say it with an apology and say it sincerely like "Im very sorry to everyone who liked to read this but it is with a painful heart that this is discontinued"
You ARE WRITERS NEVER let anyone get to you just because of a small flame be strong and correct your errors!~
10/13/2016 c1 tanzar81
I am starting this knowing it is discontinued. But hey if you put 150,000 words and a few years into it then I'm going to read it. Thank you for sharing.
I am starting this knowing it is discontinued. But hey if you put 150,000 words and a few years into it then I'm going to read it. Thank you for sharing.