for The Devil's Goddess12/16/2014 c1 Guest
I'm not hating, it's the truth. Just look how bad this story is in general.
I'm not hating, it's the truth. Just look how bad this story is in general.
12/13/2014 c9 Sharkzord
WTF is this? This looks like a disaster in the making. I suggest sticking to a single storyline, not a convoluted mess you're probably planning to do. Polish it or something so that you can tell it more effectively. At least try and improve your pacing.
Do not mind the flamers dude, they're simply out there to screw you over. Some people just want the attention for being jerks.
WTF is this? This looks like a disaster in the making. I suggest sticking to a single storyline, not a convoluted mess you're probably planning to do. Polish it or something so that you can tell it more effectively. At least try and improve your pacing.
Do not mind the flamers dude, they're simply out there to screw you over. Some people just want the attention for being jerks.
12/9/2014 c9 Iron Chicken
Nice chapter. Here's hoping for more.
Nice chapter. Here's hoping for more.
12/9/2014 c9 KamenWriter
That is one out of the blue chapter. :3
That is one out of the blue chapter. :3
9/23/2014 c8 revetwrot
Something went wrong with the process. All I see is mostly programming data. you may need to resubmit the chapter or something of the like
Something went wrong with the process. All I see is mostly programming data. you may need to resubmit the chapter or something of the like
9/15/2014 c7 YuukiAsuna-Chan
well, all i can really say is going by what i have seen of Lind in the anime and manga, Dante would destroy her without much trouble at all if he actually took it seriously
at this time i cant really decide if i like this or not, it has potential but not sure if you can bring it out
well, all i can really say is going by what i have seen of Lind in the anime and manga, Dante would destroy her without much trouble at all if he actually took it seriously
at this time i cant really decide if i like this or not, it has potential but not sure if you can bring it out
8/26/2014 c7 
5BloodTrinity
Hm, a flashback of a hit wielding a weapon with strength beyond his years, a crying girl, a picture of his orphanage..I think I know what your plotting... but I shall sit back and wait o3o/ good luck on the next chappie
5BloodTrinityHm, a flashback of a hit wielding a weapon with strength beyond his years, a crying girl, a picture of his orphanage..I think I know what your plotting... but I shall sit back and wait o3o/ good luck on the next chappie
8/23/2014 c7 Jose19
The chapter was good but it was rather short because i want to read more about how Dante is dealing with Lind because Lind will have a tough time dealing with Dante since he is not like Keichi at all.
The chapter was good but it was rather short because i want to read more about how Dante is dealing with Lind because Lind will have a tough time dealing with Dante since he is not like Keichi at all.
7/25/2014 c6 Guest
Oooh! Have them fight Bob Barbas! I wasnt to see Linds reaction to his saying 'just doing God's work'.
And her reaction when he calls her and Dante 'known sexual deviants...'
And i want to see Lind and Dante eventually grow into a romance.
Oooh! Have them fight Bob Barbas! I wasnt to see Linds reaction to his saying 'just doing God's work'.
And her reaction when he calls her and Dante 'known sexual deviants...'
And i want to see Lind and Dante eventually grow into a romance.
5/29/2014 c3 Guest
Lol Lind with a grudge. Quick Dante run!
Dante really may cry poor jukebox.
Lol almighty.
Lol Lind with a grudge. Quick Dante run!
Dante really may cry poor jukebox.
Lol almighty.