for Lord Of Winterfell6/15/2015 c3 Guest
finish the story please
finish the story please
1/10/2014 c3 
2Sayainprincess07
Nooooooooo :(
Bad Tyrion BAD. Why in the world would he go there the last Stark that did lost his head.
If the red preistress burns him alive I wonder if he will be a dragon and rise from the flames :P just sayin.
2Sayainprincess07Nooooooooo :(
Bad Tyrion BAD. Why in the world would he go there the last Stark that did lost his head.
If the red preistress burns him alive I wonder if he will be a dragon and rise from the flames :P just sayin.
7/28/2013 c3 Guest
Nice chapter maybe what you should do is have the lannisters sends a small force led by maybe Mace Tyrell and have jon and stannis beat the army then either have mace burnt to the lord of light so milesandre thinks jon is loyal or have it where she wants him burnt but they have the tyrells join stannis if they want mace to live and
Milesandre gets pissed off
Nice chapter maybe what you should do is have the lannisters sends a small force led by maybe Mace Tyrell and have jon and stannis beat the army then either have mace burnt to the lord of light so milesandre thinks jon is loyal or have it where she wants him burnt but they have the tyrells join stannis if they want mace to live and
Milesandre gets pissed off
6/21/2013 c3 1TheGuyThatSaysHI
Very good! This is aspiring to be an enjoyable story. Though I believe Mace Tyrell is the Hand of The King after Joffrey and Tywin's deaths.
1TheGuyThatSaysHIVery good! This is aspiring to be an enjoyable story. Though I believe Mace Tyrell is the Hand of The King after Joffrey and Tywin's deaths.
8/1/2012 c2 LordofRhovanion
I dont know if killing Jon is the solution, supposedly King's blood gives Melisandre power but Jon doesnt have King's blood, not unless you buy into the RLJ theory, Robb was his brother not his father and Eddard never claimed to be a king
I dont know if killing Jon is the solution, supposedly King's blood gives Melisandre power but Jon doesnt have King's blood, not unless you buy into the RLJ theory, Robb was his brother not his father and Eddard never claimed to be a king
7/24/2012 c3 7Oberon Sexton
Dun Dun dahhh!
I quite liked this, it Jon slowly rebuilding and paying homage to his family was touching, them Lannisters and their schemes! But what exactly is the timeline with Joffrey still alive?
Either way I look forward to more!
7Oberon SextonDun Dun dahhh!
I quite liked this, it Jon slowly rebuilding and paying homage to his family was touching, them Lannisters and their schemes! But what exactly is the timeline with Joffrey still alive?
Either way I look forward to more!
7/23/2012 c3 19Failed to De-anon
Poor Jon, if it's not one thing it's another...It's if trying to rebuild his family's seat, knowing most of his family is dead and/or missing, the Wildings, and the Others, and Melisandre trying to kill him wasn't enough to be concerned about.
19Failed to De-anonPoor Jon, if it's not one thing it's another...It's if trying to rebuild his family's seat, knowing most of his family is dead and/or missing, the Wildings, and the Others, and Melisandre trying to kill him wasn't enough to be concerned about.
7/21/2012 c2 Guest
lol if someone were to speak of burning me in front of my face, i would take it a sign to shove a bastard sword up his/her back. Serious that red priestess sound crazier than a outhouse rat. I take it as a sign that she wont like much longer then.
lol if someone were to speak of burning me in front of my face, i would take it a sign to shove a bastard sword up his/her back. Serious that red priestess sound crazier than a outhouse rat. I take it as a sign that she wont like much longer then.
7/19/2012 c1 Liebert
This is really really good, I can't wait to see what happens next, yay!
please update soon! *following*
This is really really good, I can't wait to see what happens next, yay!
please update soon! *following*
7/18/2012 c1 Guest
I love it keep going
I love it keep going
7/18/2012 c1 7Oberon Sexton
This was a pretty good first chapter, I'd love to see more of this scenario and it's something that I'm surprised no one else has thought of.
You've got Jon's thoughts down pretty good and I can't wait to see how this pairing takes off.
Also the child in question is Mance and Dalla's correct ?
Anyways I look forward to seeing more!
7Oberon SextonThis was a pretty good first chapter, I'd love to see more of this scenario and it's something that I'm surprised no one else has thought of.
You've got Jon's thoughts down pretty good and I can't wait to see how this pairing takes off.
Also the child in question is Mance and Dalla's correct ?
Anyways I look forward to seeing more!
7/18/2012 c1 Johan
yeah, i'm love this plot and this pairing will be interesting to read.. Keep it up! Jon Stark rulez
yeah, i'm love this plot and this pairing will be interesting to read.. Keep it up! Jon Stark rulez
7/18/2012 c1 Guest
Nice teaser chapter. I'm glad to see this since there are barely any fanfictions exploring this 'what if'. I presume the child is Jarl's? Please update again soon.
Nice teaser chapter. I'm glad to see this since there are barely any fanfictions exploring this 'what if'. I presume the child is Jarl's? Please update again soon.