for Second Time Around8/10/2021 c8 Guest
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8/10/2021 c7 Guest
Ouch! I hope your finger is okay ️
Ouch! I hope your finger is okay ️
8/10/2021 c16 Guest
I don't find Hermione's sudden lack of understanding when it comes to her own emotions convincing. Since she was able to pinpoint before when she was feeling jealous and also recognised her own crush on Ron in the previous chapters. To think that she wouldn't even acknowledge her own feelings about Pansy and Draco as something like possessiveness or even acknowledge that the kiss clearly meant that Draco liked her does not make sense for her character in my opinion.
I'd solve this by either going back and editing previous chapters to fit the narrative that she's just not that introspective or adjust her perspective and make her acknowledge that she's shy or just not ready to admit to her feelings.
This regression does not fit and makes her look rather dumb.
I don't find Hermione's sudden lack of understanding when it comes to her own emotions convincing. Since she was able to pinpoint before when she was feeling jealous and also recognised her own crush on Ron in the previous chapters. To think that she wouldn't even acknowledge her own feelings about Pansy and Draco as something like possessiveness or even acknowledge that the kiss clearly meant that Draco liked her does not make sense for her character in my opinion.
I'd solve this by either going back and editing previous chapters to fit the narrative that she's just not that introspective or adjust her perspective and make her acknowledge that she's shy or just not ready to admit to her feelings.
This regression does not fit and makes her look rather dumb.
7/29/2021 c8 
6FelineNinjaGrace
I wish that Harry and Draco could be friends in secret. If Hermione can be friends with him in secret then surely Harry can too! Not Ron though. No one likes him ;) lol
6FelineNinjaGraceI wish that Harry and Draco could be friends in secret. If Hermione can be friends with him in secret then surely Harry can too! Not Ron though. No one likes him ;) lol
7/22/2021 c19 FibonnacciStars
I love how you mention that he likes her natural curls before talking about her pretty hairdo. As a wild haired person the trope where softer waves are part of the glow-up always weirded me out
I love how you mention that he likes her natural curls before talking about her pretty hairdo. As a wild haired person the trope where softer waves are part of the glow-up always weirded me out
7/20/2021 c13 lynxfic
Really enjoyed this chapter. I love Draco and Theo's friendship. And of course I love Draco and Hermione.
Really enjoyed this chapter. I love Draco and Theo's friendship. And of course I love Draco and Hermione.