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4/3/2013 c1 Anonymous
Please update.
7/22/2012 c1 28bubbajack
Wow this is some crazy shit dude and I've read Elfien Lied. Liked the chap. I think the time Travlers are the kids of some of the Reapers and I think Leiko might be Rukia's kid possibily.
7/21/2012 c1 1Tannhauser
So far I would say it's alright, it's only early days so far and the opening chapter was brief, more or less just a very quick look at our new Soul Reapers are.

But I would like to see the future threat and it links to the present

Also on the OCs although we have only gotten a brief discription of them, at the moment they seem alright. Personaly I like the idea of a group of younger, weaker Soul Reapers than say just Ichigo or his super powered descendent which I've seen as a common theme of time travel stories in Bleach Fanfiction. I do also like that you have not made it clear straight out if the bat who the future Soul Reapers are descended from although I could take a guess who though :P the same for "Head Captain Oblvion" might be.

So in summary although I brief opening I will keep out a eye to see where this develops.

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