for The Caged Bird Sings7/28/2012 c1 
14Miyu Shinohara
Nice first chapter- really liking the premise around this, admittingly yeah it was pretty short and imo I think it could have used a little more build up, king of showing what led up to it. Still think you're up to a nice start though, good work c:
14Miyu ShinoharaNice first chapter- really liking the premise around this, admittingly yeah it was pretty short and imo I think it could have used a little more build up, king of showing what led up to it. Still think you're up to a nice start though, good work c: