for SOL8/14/2024 c9 Emerald Raven
Its an amazing story with a beautiful blend of fantasy history political rivalry and romance although still waiting for Gaanaru especially after the last chapter where Gaara threw Naruto to monsters. Wanna see how Gaara makes up for it. Also your writing style is beautiful, its three in the morning and I have just completed this fic which has become my favourite. Its been years since the last updated but I really hope you will complete this story of a vampire and an immortal.
Its an amazing story with a beautiful blend of fantasy history political rivalry and romance although still waiting for Gaanaru especially after the last chapter where Gaara threw Naruto to monsters. Wanna see how Gaara makes up for it. Also your writing style is beautiful, its three in the morning and I have just completed this fic which has become my favourite. Its been years since the last updated but I really hope you will complete this story of a vampire and an immortal.
9/5/2022 c9 TechnoAngelprincess
wow it's been years since I revised this story and I'm still waiting for an update lol
wow it's been years since I revised this story and I'm still waiting for an update lol
10/10/2020 c8 Papapapap77
Gosh I hope one day this gets updated. The setting of the story is so harsh and brutal. I don’t mean it in a bad way, I ALREADY love this story but everything happening to Naruto is so harsh. He’s just getting tormented, torn up to pieces, getting raped, being abandoned by so many people and so much more. We don’t even know what he is and the whiskers too?! God, when will we ever see him smile because he’s truly happy? Anyways, I love how different Sasuke is in this story, he’s more.. I guess thoughtful? cant really say much since we don’t know much but he’s somewhat kind to Naruto. And all the characters wow. They’re all in character and merged into your story like glue. Amazing. Nobody feels out of character. And Gaara... man I was so happy that this is GaaNaru and this is one of your stories where he can use sand like in canon but after chapter 9...i kinda wanted to beat the shit out of Gaara like what Naruto did. I imagined him to be a little different but, wow, after he ruthlessly used Naruto as a meat bait for the lycans and did not care. God that made me BOIL so bad. How is he suppose to make up for that for later chapters? I pity Naruto so badly, the only worth is his blood to the Soulless. Nobody sees him as anything else :(. And now that I think of it, I’m starting to get why Naruto smells like the sun, it’s because he’s a “gift” from the sol right? That’s why he smells like the sun? I hope one day he beats the shit out of Kankuro. My gosh I’ll never forgive him humiliating Naruto. AND IS HINATA OK? What do you mean by bearer? Is she brainwashed or controlled? And will Naruto piano play a role is the story one day?!
So many questions I have in my head as this story is so interesting, I pray everyday that any stories of yours just get updated. Your writing is so talented and unique. And god... idk if it was intentional or not but Danse Macabre is a good title. “Dance of Death” is what I would describe Naruto life situation. Now finding out that he’s immortal and being unable to cross the path of the afterlife.. it’s such a tense situation for somebody who doesn’t even know ANYTHING but suffering. And for him to “die” once and come back alive, I’m sure that was a dance of death since he did not die.. haha.. can’t really explain it. If this story ever updates, I’m gonna really cry from tears. Hopefully one day.
Gosh I hope one day this gets updated. The setting of the story is so harsh and brutal. I don’t mean it in a bad way, I ALREADY love this story but everything happening to Naruto is so harsh. He’s just getting tormented, torn up to pieces, getting raped, being abandoned by so many people and so much more. We don’t even know what he is and the whiskers too?! God, when will we ever see him smile because he’s truly happy? Anyways, I love how different Sasuke is in this story, he’s more.. I guess thoughtful? cant really say much since we don’t know much but he’s somewhat kind to Naruto. And all the characters wow. They’re all in character and merged into your story like glue. Amazing. Nobody feels out of character. And Gaara... man I was so happy that this is GaaNaru and this is one of your stories where he can use sand like in canon but after chapter 9...i kinda wanted to beat the shit out of Gaara like what Naruto did. I imagined him to be a little different but, wow, after he ruthlessly used Naruto as a meat bait for the lycans and did not care. God that made me BOIL so bad. How is he suppose to make up for that for later chapters? I pity Naruto so badly, the only worth is his blood to the Soulless. Nobody sees him as anything else :(. And now that I think of it, I’m starting to get why Naruto smells like the sun, it’s because he’s a “gift” from the sol right? That’s why he smells like the sun? I hope one day he beats the shit out of Kankuro. My gosh I’ll never forgive him humiliating Naruto. AND IS HINATA OK? What do you mean by bearer? Is she brainwashed or controlled? And will Naruto piano play a role is the story one day?!
So many questions I have in my head as this story is so interesting, I pray everyday that any stories of yours just get updated. Your writing is so talented and unique. And god... idk if it was intentional or not but Danse Macabre is a good title. “Dance of Death” is what I would describe Naruto life situation. Now finding out that he’s immortal and being unable to cross the path of the afterlife.. it’s such a tense situation for somebody who doesn’t even know ANYTHING but suffering. And for him to “die” once and come back alive, I’m sure that was a dance of death since he did not die.. haha.. can’t really explain it. If this story ever updates, I’m gonna really cry from tears. Hopefully one day.
8/26/2020 c9 Papapapap77
Christ this story concept is so mature and dark... makes me feel so many emotions. You’re really a good writer! How you describe every scene and gaara it’s outstanding!
Christ this story concept is so mature and dark... makes me feel so many emotions. You’re really a good writer! How you describe every scene and gaara it’s outstanding!
4/9/2018 c8 
2yumenohime-sama
Please tell me if you decided to continue this story? TTTT poor naruto... there's no SasuNaru and GaaNaru so far... .
you have great ideas for stories and the way you write it are nice and detailed, i love them.. :D please continue... TT
2yumenohime-samaPlease tell me if you decided to continue this story? TTTT poor naruto... there's no SasuNaru and GaaNaru so far... .
you have great ideas for stories and the way you write it are nice and detailed, i love them.. :D please continue... TT
8/13/2017 c9 Foreshadow Of Darkness
Wow. Legendary, I dont think i have read anything this good. CONTINUE. Has made it to my favorites
Wow. Legendary, I dont think i have read anything this good. CONTINUE. Has made it to my favorites
5/8/2017 c9 guestaq
Omg amazing story plz conrinue x
Omg amazing story plz conrinue x
12/19/2016 c7 guest
What an awesome fic! I love it. Gaara is really scary in this, reminds me a bit of the old Naruto. Good times. It seems you haven't updated this in forever, but I really really hope you change your mind some day and write again :)
What an awesome fic! I love it. Gaara is really scary in this, reminds me a bit of the old Naruto. Good times. It seems you haven't updated this in forever, but I really really hope you change your mind some day and write again :)
5/29/2016 c9 1curiouskitty14
This is so go that I keep rereading it over and over again. Has this story really been abandoned?
1curiouskitty14This is so go that I keep rereading it over and over again. Has this story really been abandoned?
4/8/2016 c9 Kelsey Dragomir
Please don't let the story end here! I really hope Naruto ends up with Gaara.
Please don't let the story end here! I really hope Naruto ends up with Gaara.