1/14/2018 c1 Levyfan
Did you have to do this? The last time I cried this much, was after my brother told me MCR broke up...
Did you have to do this? The last time I cried this much, was after my brother told me MCR broke up...
8/28/2012 c8 2TheLastLineOfDefence
This is a brilliant piece of fanfiction, I haven't read a story before that sucessfully faced a problem without a solution, the temptation to try and give everyone a happy ending is really strong but the effect and the added realism acheived by leaving it at a point where they know they will never have a happy ending is definitely stronger than any fairy tail ending could be. This is much more believable as an issue that a pair of clever, kind, men really wouldn't be able to solve without hurting someone, it conveys the impossibility of a situation in which every solution will result in hurting at least yourself. A breathtaking story.
This is a brilliant piece of fanfiction, I haven't read a story before that sucessfully faced a problem without a solution, the temptation to try and give everyone a happy ending is really strong but the effect and the added realism acheived by leaving it at a point where they know they will never have a happy ending is definitely stronger than any fairy tail ending could be. This is much more believable as an issue that a pair of clever, kind, men really wouldn't be able to solve without hurting someone, it conveys the impossibility of a situation in which every solution will result in hurting at least yourself. A breathtaking story.
8/1/2012 c8 1Lilikinz
You kill me, you really do.
I just.
I can't even.
WHYY.
MY HEART. MY POOR LITTLE HEART.
You kill me, you really do.
I just.
I can't even.
WHYY.
MY HEART. MY POOR LITTLE HEART.
7/27/2012 c6 1BlackxForever
Wow! Thank you for the update! And really, Lyn-Z has terrible timing :(. Where did Frankie go? And I realised that when Mikey walked in, Gerard still hadn't put any clothes on...? Je suis intrigué. xx
Wow! Thank you for the update! And really, Lyn-Z has terrible timing :(. Where did Frankie go? And I realised that when Mikey walked in, Gerard still hadn't put any clothes on...? Je suis intrigué. xx
7/27/2012 c5 BlackxForever
Aaawww, c'mon, where's the rest? This is the best tour Frerard I've read! Far more realistic - besides Frank coughing up blood and nobody getting him to a hospital or something. This is going on Story Alerts, and maybe Favourites if I like the next update (which I'm sure I will) :). xx
Aaawww, c'mon, where's the rest? This is the best tour Frerard I've read! Far more realistic - besides Frank coughing up blood and nobody getting him to a hospital or something. This is going on Story Alerts, and maybe Favourites if I like the next update (which I'm sure I will) :). xx