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7/28/2012 c1 Stace
Very detailed, I feel like I can see everything!
7/27/2012 c4 Jo
alls im saying is cant wait for chapter 5! :D xx
7/26/2012 c3 Jo
Can't wait for chapter 4. Although i liked it for me personally I thought the other 2 chapters were better but you do need this to build up to the main plot so its understandable still enjoyable though :) keep it up xxx
7/26/2012 c3 Adelaide
I love this so much (and that's really saying something considering I usually HATE vampire stories) I really can't wait for chapter 4! Keep it up :) 3
7/26/2012 c3 Izz
I thought it was really good and very realistic, I could imagine exactly what you had written. It's really imaginative! The excessive swearing is shocking and yet exciting lol!
7/24/2012 c2 1Maddie92
I honestly don't know what you're worried about baby girl you're going to be fine! Everybody loves an Ain't Shit Sam.. I'd love to see where this story is going, how it will play out.. Continue doing your thing girl, you know we're here for you 100%.. Paul x
7/24/2012 c2 Jo
LOVE IT! Can't wait for chapter 3 :D
7/24/2012 c1 Jo
Yet another fantastic piece of writing, you're really developing that creative writing and you are DEFINITELY getting your own way of writing.
Love it, absolutely hooked on reading it. xx
7/24/2012 c1 afriendlycritic
Really good for your first try, you need to read your blurb again. Your writing style is well developed however can be a bit forced in places. lt would be best if you can analyse one or two well written books or even other fanfictions and for you to develop your writing style even more. But all in all it was a great pieve of writing.
7/23/2012 c1 Aneela Banu
This is really good Daviann :)
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