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6/11/2013 c1 C0pp3rSh4d0w
this one impressed me. i could picture the whole scenario in my head. it appears as though you just write scenes at a time. there's nothing wrong with that, don't get me wrong. but have you ever considered writing more than just a scene or two? you've got great potential and really could get it going. just work on the spelling and punctuation a bit, and you'll be fine.

Sláinte!
8/13/2012 c1 3reina13
love it hope you keep it going
7/28/2012 c1 Guest
So cool! I love it!
7/27/2012 c1 3Nutbrain
I liked this story! It was cute :3

I liked how you conveyed the sense of worry. It was very realistic and definitely drew me in!

The ending was adorable. Reid has ninja tricks now, sneaking consults away from Hotch :)

Awesome story!

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