for Matchsticks4/1/2014 c1 OptimisticLady
"Ready for your first raid, Longbottom?" sounds like an innuendo like they're about to invade his Long Bottom.
But this was so good ashdlakjsgd and the Luna/Neville bit at the end was hella cute :3
"Ready for your first raid, Longbottom?" sounds like an innuendo like they're about to invade his Long Bottom.
But this was so good ashdlakjsgd and the Luna/Neville bit at the end was hella cute :3
7/27/2013 c1 
22shadowpuff
Good story. Funny too. I like how Neville gets save by Luna in the end. You captured Neville really well.
Good writing style. The story flows really well. You just need to check your spacing. I can't really say anything about the spelling, because my spelling sucks.
Otherwise, I love it.
22shadowpuffGood story. Funny too. I like how Neville gets save by Luna in the end. You captured Neville really well.
Good writing style. The story flows really well. You just need to check your spacing. I can't really say anything about the spelling, because my spelling sucks.
Otherwise, I love it.
12/16/2012 c1 Guest
I meant you haven't posted in a while, sorry.
I meant you haven't posted in a while, sorry.
12/16/2012 c1 ThoroughlySherlocked
Hey there!
I just found this fic, and I'm glad I did.
It's really good, even if some parts are a bit OOC.
Great job, continue writing! You haven't been on in a while!
This fic's great, by the way. Why doesn't it have more reviews?
Cheers!
TS :)
Hey there!
I just found this fic, and I'm glad I did.
It's really good, even if some parts are a bit OOC.
Great job, continue writing! You haven't been on in a while!
This fic's great, by the way. Why doesn't it have more reviews?
Cheers!
TS :)