
3/6/2016 c2 johnsonml2004
Are you kidding me! You cant stop the story there! Please finish it and soon! Or make another story continuing this one. Just hurry!
Are you kidding me! You cant stop the story there! Please finish it and soon! Or make another story continuing this one. Just hurry!
11/22/2015 c2 Kayhlie
Omg, that was awesome! I'm sad that it had to end
Omg, that was awesome! I'm sad that it had to end
1/25/2015 c2
2dezzykitkats
OH MY GAWSH I LOVE IT! Are you continuing this story? I can't wait to see what happens next!

OH MY GAWSH I LOVE IT! Are you continuing this story? I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/10/2012 c2 LoudNProud
wow that was brilliantly funny! :D
wow that was brilliantly funny! :D
7/28/2012 c2
5FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
! OMG THAT WAS SO FUNNY! I needed to keep my mouth closed, due to brushing teeth and a mouth full of toothpaste and whatnot. Let's just say I am VERY lucky that my computer isnt shorting out right now.
now, back to lovely images: Rainbows, unicorns, pegasi, FAX! TIVA! MCABBY! JIBBS! NIGGY!

! OMG THAT WAS SO FUNNY! I needed to keep my mouth closed, due to brushing teeth and a mouth full of toothpaste and whatnot. Let's just say I am VERY lucky that my computer isnt shorting out right now.
now, back to lovely images: Rainbows, unicorns, pegasi, FAX! TIVA! MCABBY! JIBBS! NIGGY!
7/26/2012 c2
3Serenaisbestezrq387
Haha! That's what you get when you make bets on her whoa ooh ooooooh oh! Yay for paramore!

Haha! That's what you get when you make bets on her whoa ooh ooooooh oh! Yay for paramore!
7/26/2012 c1
1SellTheeSoul4Bacon
Nice detail, but do you really think Max would act like that? Like she was a character in a cheesy romance? I really don't think Max would swoon or you know, get a hicky.
Now, I'm no flamer! Just trying to give ACTUAL advise.

Nice detail, but do you really think Max would act like that? Like she was a character in a cheesy romance? I really don't think Max would swoon or you know, get a hicky.
Now, I'm no flamer! Just trying to give ACTUAL advise.
7/26/2012 c2
3DragonGirl317
Haha! Love it! This is what we need more of, stories with good grammer! Nice job! Great plot too! :)

Haha! Love it! This is what we need more of, stories with good grammer! Nice job! Great plot too! :)
7/26/2012 c2 Guest
Poor Nudge!
Poor Nudge!
7/26/2012 c2 FireInMyHeart226
*dies laughing* Annie, I thought you were the innocent one! But this is pretty damn well written, i must say. *smirks slightly* Almost TOO well written if you ask me... LOL. Love you in the most heterosexual way. XD
*dies laughing* Annie, I thought you were the innocent one! But this is pretty damn well written, i must say. *smirks slightly* Almost TOO well written if you ask me... LOL. Love you in the most heterosexual way. XD
7/25/2012 c2 Me
Haha love the story! Ur a great writer! Yeah u showed that kid at camp who thought u were innocent! Can't wait 4 the update!
Haha love the story! Ur a great writer! Yeah u showed that kid at camp who thought u were innocent! Can't wait 4 the update!