for Road to Sakura7/8/2014 c27 ggg
First step stolen kisses, second step straight out rape. That's what guys who have no respect for girls boundaries are like. In other words, no I didn't think he was romantic taking her lips against her will.
First step stolen kisses, second step straight out rape. That's what guys who have no respect for girls boundaries are like. In other words, no I didn't think he was romantic taking her lips against her will.
7/7/2014 c27 Kat
Lol yes! I can't wait for the next update :) I just started reading this story Today and couldn't stop. This is a refreshing take on rtn. I enjoy reading your story.
Lol yes! I can't wait for the next update :) I just started reading this story Today and couldn't stop. This is a refreshing take on rtn. I enjoy reading your story.
6/14/2014 c24 
23fisherkingstone
The Sannin dynamics here is interesting-Orochimaru is mellow and rather bland, although I may have forgotten if you'd mentioned him in the previous chapters...and it's curious that Jiraiya left out of spite, and disappeared. And previously it was mentioned Oto was under Tsunade, so I do wonder what Jiraiya is doing in a world where the Akatsuki is a benevolent if mercenary group.
Of course it will be all sorts of ironic if Tsunade ended up invading Konoha for reasons. I hope not. I'm looking forward to Sakura knocking some senses into her, in any case. Or will she wind up teaching Sakura a thing or two? It'll be interesting to see which direction you're going with this subplot.
And Ino. I wonder what Temari did to put her in a deep coma that might just require the world's greatest medic to heal. What you did with the Sand Siblings' dynamics is also quite original, in that I don't think anyone has ever thought to warp *Temari* from being harsh but soft to select people, but not generous with her cruelty into a cruel older sister whom her brothers feared. I wonder if Gaara is still a jinchuriki here; he seems rather mellow too.
Actually the world seems rather low on antagonists, but that's a criticism to be levelled at the original Road to Ninja, though even then I'm sure that was rather the point of the AU.
Sakura is growing as a character, although I did think her change of heart was rather too abrupt-but Haku did that to you. You didn't just flip hers and Sasuke's personality, which is good. She is still recognisably an extrapolation of canon Sakura.
I'll be looking forward to where you're going with this.
23fisherkingstoneThe Sannin dynamics here is interesting-Orochimaru is mellow and rather bland, although I may have forgotten if you'd mentioned him in the previous chapters...and it's curious that Jiraiya left out of spite, and disappeared. And previously it was mentioned Oto was under Tsunade, so I do wonder what Jiraiya is doing in a world where the Akatsuki is a benevolent if mercenary group.
Of course it will be all sorts of ironic if Tsunade ended up invading Konoha for reasons. I hope not. I'm looking forward to Sakura knocking some senses into her, in any case. Or will she wind up teaching Sakura a thing or two? It'll be interesting to see which direction you're going with this subplot.
And Ino. I wonder what Temari did to put her in a deep coma that might just require the world's greatest medic to heal. What you did with the Sand Siblings' dynamics is also quite original, in that I don't think anyone has ever thought to warp *Temari* from being harsh but soft to select people, but not generous with her cruelty into a cruel older sister whom her brothers feared. I wonder if Gaara is still a jinchuriki here; he seems rather mellow too.
Actually the world seems rather low on antagonists, but that's a criticism to be levelled at the original Road to Ninja, though even then I'm sure that was rather the point of the AU.
Sakura is growing as a character, although I did think her change of heart was rather too abrupt-but Haku did that to you. You didn't just flip hers and Sasuke's personality, which is good. She is still recognisably an extrapolation of canon Sakura.
I'll be looking forward to where you're going with this.
6/5/2014 c23 2Toreh
I just love that this is taking place in road to ninja verse. You've done such an excellent job with the characters! I also really enjoyed Sakura and Hinata's heart to heart. Well done!
2TorehI just love that this is taking place in road to ninja verse. You've done such an excellent job with the characters! I also really enjoyed Sakura and Hinata's heart to heart. Well done!
6/3/2014 c22 SnowCharms
I have to admit, I was aghast when you changed Kakashi's personality, but it didn't end up being too bad I suppose, and I'm interested in reading more.
I have to admit, I was aghast when you changed Kakashi's personality, but it didn't end up being too bad I suppose, and I'm interested in reading more.
1/24/2014 c4 queenfirst
HAHA SASUKE U LIL SHIT
oh, this is so exciting! i love their characters, and i love how naruto is still the same. kakashi...i can't...
HAHA SASUKE U LIL SHIT
oh, this is so exciting! i love their characters, and i love how naruto is still the same. kakashi...i can't...