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7/7/2014 c27 Kat
Lol yes! I can't wait for the next update :) I just started reading this story Today and couldn't stop. This is a refreshing take on rtn. I enjoy reading your story.
7/7/2014 c27 1maxridelover
wow that was something else!
7/7/2014 c1 16Duesal Bladesinger
Very, very interesting.
6/16/2014 c25 hateme101
I like how you ended this chapter
6/14/2014 c24 23fisherkingstone
The Sannin dynamics here is interesting-Orochimaru is mellow and rather bland, although I may have forgotten if you'd mentioned him in the previous chapters...and it's curious that Jiraiya left out of spite, and disappeared. And previously it was mentioned Oto was under Tsunade, so I do wonder what Jiraiya is doing in a world where the Akatsuki is a benevolent if mercenary group.

Of course it will be all sorts of ironic if Tsunade ended up invading Konoha for reasons. I hope not. I'm looking forward to Sakura knocking some senses into her, in any case. Or will she wind up teaching Sakura a thing or two? It'll be interesting to see which direction you're going with this subplot.

And Ino. I wonder what Temari did to put her in a deep coma that might just require the world's greatest medic to heal. What you did with the Sand Siblings' dynamics is also quite original, in that I don't think anyone has ever thought to warp *Temari* from being harsh but soft to select people, but not generous with her cruelty into a cruel older sister whom her brothers feared. I wonder if Gaara is still a jinchuriki here; he seems rather mellow too.

Actually the world seems rather low on antagonists, but that's a criticism to be levelled at the original Road to Ninja, though even then I'm sure that was rather the point of the AU.

Sakura is growing as a character, although I did think her change of heart was rather too abrupt-but Haku did that to you. You didn't just flip hers and Sasuke's personality, which is good. She is still recognisably an extrapolation of canon Sakura.

I'll be looking forward to where you're going with this.
6/10/2014 c24 sasusaku3623649
It's sooo adorible how orochimaru is her teacher !
6/10/2014 c24 hateme101
wow your making Jiraiya evil?
6/8/2014 c23 5kelpiejh
Sakura! Go kick Temari's butt!
6/5/2014 c23 2Toreh
I just love that this is taking place in road to ninja verse. You've done such an excellent job with the characters! I also really enjoyed Sakura and Hinata's heart to heart. Well done!
6/3/2014 c22 SnowCharms
I have to admit, I was aghast when you changed Kakashi's personality, but it didn't end up being too bad I suppose, and I'm interested in reading more.
6/3/2014 c22 5kelpiejh
I hope everything will be ok...
1/26/2014 c21 leafstone
great story.
1/24/2014 c5 6queenfirst
hm, i don't think anyone - even naruto - would ask such a thing...
1/24/2014 c4 queenfirst
oh, this is so exciting! i love their characters, and i love how naruto is still the same. kakashi...i can't...
9/14/2013 c21 AngelesPG
hay que linda amistad espero q se lleven bien ahora ellas jajja como antes claro que tambien serio una relacion de amigas-rivales jajaja x fis actualiza pronto gracias
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