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2/13/2016 c4 LMJM5h
More please
6/7/2015 c4 Eric
Cara and Kahlan for ever.
8/25/2014 c3 5supasoph
Ke this going
10/15/2013 c3 Wiylao
I hope you write more )
5/7/2013 c3 Sylverkubus
you should write more and update soon...hopefully longer.
1/1/2013 c3 LMJM5h
Good more pls
12/22/2012 c3 1RedEye0110
Hope you write more.
12/13/2012 c3 Vargas1989
Yup I like it!
11/23/2012 c3 14HarukaIs
i love this fic
11/15/2012 c3 IqahEvil
Really sorry for the speed. I have a lot of ideas stuck in my head but my English is just atrocious.. Sorry..
11/8/2012 c3 SanKK
What I'm going to say is just what I think, so please don't take it bad. The plot could be interesting, but you go too fast. There's no deepening of situations and characters or even places. You give to the reader no aid to imagine the scenes. Some actions are too exaggerated and it seems like you put everything togheter without really plan it.

This is just my opinion, and I giving it to you because I think writers can get better especially with criticisms, and I hope you'll see this as a constructive one.

(And sorry for my english, but it's not my first language)

My best wishes,

SanKK
11/6/2012 c3 1SkySwimmer19
Yay! They've admitted it to each other that is totally awesome! Super glad you updated and looking forward to the next one!
CloudGazer15
11/4/2012 c3 Guest
Great update worth waiting for !
11/4/2012 c3 itsmefiebs
you're doing a great job :)
11/3/2012 c2 itsmefiebs
Can't wait to reas more xd
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