
8/8/2012 c3 looove
Really good! :)
Really good! :)
7/29/2012 c2
6Nekotan1999
it is quite good but you should improve your sentence writing. It is a little rushed so slow it down and people can follow it better.

it is quite good but you should improve your sentence writing. It is a little rushed so slow it down and people can follow it better.
7/26/2012 c1 dustfeather17
i cant wait to find out what happened to ryoma update the next chapter as soon as possible ! ! ! ! !
i cant wait to find out what happened to ryoma update the next chapter as soon as possible ! ! ! ! !
7/26/2012 c1 Guest
Awesome story can't wait to read more! .
Awesome story can't wait to read more! .