for Hunting for Homki6/18/2020 c1 RatherFabulous
And here's where things go with autism. Often curious, often intelligent, but their disconnect can be dangerous. I never, ever assume that they aren't listening and fully understanding what I say, not even the nonverbal students. (I have a couple of great stories there...)
They're capable of far more than people give them credit for. Unfortunately, taking off randomly and finding themselves in trouble is included.
And here's where things go with autism. Often curious, often intelligent, but their disconnect can be dangerous. I never, ever assume that they aren't listening and fully understanding what I say, not even the nonverbal students. (I have a couple of great stories there...)
They're capable of far more than people give them credit for. Unfortunately, taking off randomly and finding themselves in trouble is included.
6/5/2017 c11 Melei
Yes I likedo the story it was funny
Yes I likedo the story it was funny
9/7/2012 c11 AhsokaGeekFreak
I loved this, very touching! (not sarcastic)
I have aspergers and found this superb.
I loved this, very touching! (not sarcastic)
I have aspergers and found this superb.
9/3/2012 c11 Blazestar
Thank you for finishing! I hope to see more of your work soon!
Thank you for finishing! I hope to see more of your work soon!
9/4/2012 c11 ACEamazombie
I loved it good work I hope to have a story about a clone with autism maybe lol
I loved it good work I hope to have a story about a clone with autism maybe lol
8/30/2012 c10 
8Helena Louvel
I do like this story but you could use a bit more description for Fale and such. Introducing a new character, no matter how short their time in the story is, brokers thought and patience. Very good all together.
8Helena LouvelI do like this story but you could use a bit more description for Fale and such. Introducing a new character, no matter how short their time in the story is, brokers thought and patience. Very good all together.
8/30/2012 c10 16Vote Celtice and Mondale 2016
Well there you have the ending they all die.
It was a good chapter I don't know what's gonna happen to homki and the rest of the gang but now I'm sure that sadly there dead ;( no really that ending will suck...what?
I did like the battle scene it wasn't lame at all buy who's fale?
And one thing that has been bothering me about the story is why when the Jedi needed a to contact someone for a ride that they had a Cominlink but they dont use it I'm just wondering.
I do like this story still it's very enjoyable please update
16Vote Celtice and Mondale 2016Well there you have the ending they all die.
It was a good chapter I don't know what's gonna happen to homki and the rest of the gang but now I'm sure that sadly there dead ;( no really that ending will suck...what?
I did like the battle scene it wasn't lame at all buy who's fale?
And one thing that has been bothering me about the story is why when the Jedi needed a to contact someone for a ride that they had a Cominlink but they dont use it I'm just wondering.
I do like this story still it's very enjoyable please update
8/27/2012 c9 Vote Celtice and Mondale 2016
Homki is fighting?...that's badass :)
This chapter was short but I'm pretty sure that was intended to make the 10th chapter one of those fight scenes.
It was okay good job it was alittle short but again pretty sure it was intended so free pass.
That's so far my only complant but the characters and the actions of them felt alittle but off but it again it was too short to make us understand them.
This chapter is really hard to review cause it's kinda a bridge to another chapter.
Please update soon
Homki is fighting?...that's badass :)
This chapter was short but I'm pretty sure that was intended to make the 10th chapter one of those fight scenes.
It was okay good job it was alittle short but again pretty sure it was intended so free pass.
That's so far my only complant but the characters and the actions of them felt alittle but off but it again it was too short to make us understand them.
This chapter is really hard to review cause it's kinda a bridge to another chapter.
Please update soon
8/27/2012 c9 15spikala
It sounds like things are getting action-packed again. It was very sweet how Rex was worrying about Homki even as he charges into the fray.
I think you could've maybe expanded on the wanderings of the different groups. It would've been nice to see different parts of the city through a different POV, or a chance for characters to interact with each other.
15spikalaIt sounds like things are getting action-packed again. It was very sweet how Rex was worrying about Homki even as he charges into the fray.
I think you could've maybe expanded on the wanderings of the different groups. It would've been nice to see different parts of the city through a different POV, or a chance for characters to interact with each other.
8/22/2012 c8 16Vote Celtice and Mondale 2016
Hehits kinda funny that Anakin's phone could contact birds that's funny :)
The chapter is well detailed and once again hits on all solinders thanks for the update and keep up the good work and please update soon whenever you can
16Vote Celtice and Mondale 2016Hehits kinda funny that Anakin's phone could contact birds that's funny :)
The chapter is well detailed and once again hits on all solinders thanks for the update and keep up the good work and please update soon whenever you can
8/11/2012 c7 Guest
Great chapter! One of my favorites! I like the end of it too. And the bush was a funny idea. Keep writing! Please?
Great chapter! One of my favorites! I like the end of it too. And the bush was a funny idea. Keep writing! Please?
8/11/2012 c7 15spikala
I've really been enjoying your portrayal of Homki - it has been incredibly detailed and realistic. I can totally see him connecting with Rex (helmeted of course) best out of the group. The way you've been weaving information about Homki and autism through the story has been really great, detail but without doing a full-on info dump.
My only problem with this chapter is that the complexity of Homki's thoughts seem a tad out of character for a 6 year old. I'm by no means an expert but I did get a bit jarred out of the story by this. Also, shouldn't the rescuers realise that Homki is a bit different than your average child by now?
The last line tugged severely at my heartstrings though. "He hid them so deep inside him because if he didn't, they'd be ripped out and exposed to the world, and then he'd have nothing to call his own." So sad and poignant.
15spikalaI've really been enjoying your portrayal of Homki - it has been incredibly detailed and realistic. I can totally see him connecting with Rex (helmeted of course) best out of the group. The way you've been weaving information about Homki and autism through the story has been really great, detail but without doing a full-on info dump.
My only problem with this chapter is that the complexity of Homki's thoughts seem a tad out of character for a 6 year old. I'm by no means an expert but I did get a bit jarred out of the story by this. Also, shouldn't the rescuers realise that Homki is a bit different than your average child by now?
The last line tugged severely at my heartstrings though. "He hid them so deep inside him because if he didn't, they'd be ripped out and exposed to the world, and then he'd have nothing to call his own." So sad and poignant.