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8/12/2012 c1 Guest
I like it! Just what I was looking for(:
8/8/2012 c1 22HollyBush
Fantastic worj, as always. I have said it before and I will say it again. Your Elphaba is pitch perfect and I love your writing style. It sucks me straight into the story from the first line. I hope there will be many more to come.
8/1/2012 c1 2Throppsicle
Great drabble! I especially liked this: "Silken indigo and stretching as far as the eye could see; endless, unlimited, unlimited…"

Beautiful. Just beautiful.
7/31/2012 c1 7Bubbles-and-blondehair
Great job! I always feel so bad for Elphie, but at the same time, sort of happy that she's flying... xD
7/30/2012 c1 2GoodWitchesOfOz
I love the tone here. Everything here is fast-moving and yet you can totally hear Elphaba's voice coming through. The use of dashes and italics really help with the suspense. Great job.
Just a grammar error: "I was passed all that, now." should be "I was past all that, now." It made me stop because that line was separate from the others, and marks an important part in your piece.
7/28/2012 c1 2PrincessOfOz
You're back! :) this is really good btw

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