for First Hunt5/22/2016 c5 Leo
Damn, sorry to hear about that hope you're feeling better now :)
This is a really good start btw, looking forward to reading the next chapters when (and if) they should be uploaded.
Damn, sorry to hear about that hope you're feeling better now :)
This is a really good start btw, looking forward to reading the next chapters when (and if) they should be uploaded.
9/6/2014 c5 Guest
Hey there. I really hope everything works out for you and you get back into writing. I lived when your story was going and I hope to see you updating it soon. All the best!-jrmf
Hey there. I really hope everything works out for you and you get back into writing. I lived when your story was going and I hope to see you updating it soon. All the best!-jrmf
8/23/2014 c1 fury
Was good but needs times it felt like i was reading about humans not predators. I mean little things sitting at a bench?...and the way the preds address each other. Its was like to high school kids talking. that said not a bad effort
Was good but needs times it felt like i was reading about humans not predators. I mean little things sitting at a bench?...and the way the preds address each other. Its was like to high school kids talking. that said not a bad effort
11/20/2012 c3 Guest
good job good stories
good job good stories
10/14/2012 c4 
1Themulesrule1902
Good story I was wondering are you going to put up their descriptions in the next chapter?
1Themulesrule1902Good story I was wondering are you going to put up their descriptions in the next chapter?
9/3/2012 c3 MissE
Please write the next chapter soon.
Please write the next chapter soon.
8/9/2012 c3 1AdAstridPerAspera
Heh... good story, has great potential.
The writing style and content isn't the best I've seen, but it's fairly good. Hope to see more soon.
1AdAstridPerAsperaHeh... good story, has great potential.
The writing style and content isn't the best I've seen, but it's fairly good. Hope to see more soon.