for Check Yes Juliet12/3/2013 c1 Guest
Hate Percybeth, but then again that is just my opinion. And would someone really want to be Juliet or Romeo? They met one day at thirteen and fifteen years of age, got married the next, and committed suicide two days after. Hormone alert! I'm thirteen and thank God I wasn't born back then. I just might have committed suicide, too. Good concept, though(your story I mean, not ancient idiotic teens). I think my imagination is working well enough to imagine in Thalia and a few other details, though. But hey, if I were you I would just be proud that this actually makes sense and their is an overwhelming lack of atrocious grammar mistakes. Very hard to find these days! ;-D
SeaBreezeMist
Hate Percybeth, but then again that is just my opinion. And would someone really want to be Juliet or Romeo? They met one day at thirteen and fifteen years of age, got married the next, and committed suicide two days after. Hormone alert! I'm thirteen and thank God I wasn't born back then. I just might have committed suicide, too. Good concept, though(your story I mean, not ancient idiotic teens). I think my imagination is working well enough to imagine in Thalia and a few other details, though. But hey, if I were you I would just be proud that this actually makes sense and their is an overwhelming lack of atrocious grammar mistakes. Very hard to find these days! ;-D
SeaBreezeMist
7/29/2012 c1 
1blackvelvet33
A little corny, but kinda cute. This song does fit them very well :). ... But now it's stuck in my head! Might want to read it over again for small mistakes (goddess' cd goddesses, that sort if thing) And make sure you put that you don't own he song at the beginning. I do like the image you created at the end. I can totally imagine the Stolls taking pictures that they can use for blackmail later ;)
Lily
1blackvelvet33A little corny, but kinda cute. This song does fit them very well :). ... But now it's stuck in my head! Might want to read it over again for small mistakes (goddess' cd goddesses, that sort if thing) And make sure you put that you don't own he song at the beginning. I do like the image you created at the end. I can totally imagine the Stolls taking pictures that they can use for blackmail later ;)
Lily