for In Ashes5/22/2017 c2 guest
capturing souls? nah
capturing souls? nah
6/22/2016 c5 
10TheRangerBoy
Nice technobabble.
It actually made much more sense than 99% of it I hear.
I'd also like to note that I'd never like to get hit with the Solar Flare as described here. The process you described with possible, is a bit too far from safe compared to us normal folks. The Decay would be released as radiation, which I hope to never have to deal with too much of in my life.
I'd (At most) get a sunburn on my eyes. Yeah, nope...
10TheRangerBoyNice technobabble.
It actually made much more sense than 99% of it I hear.
I'd also like to note that I'd never like to get hit with the Solar Flare as described here. The process you described with possible, is a bit too far from safe compared to us normal folks. The Decay would be released as radiation, which I hope to never have to deal with too much of in my life.
I'd (At most) get a sunburn on my eyes. Yeah, nope...
6/19/2015 c19 1gabelou1991
C'est bien ecrit, tu reprend les bases du manga avec Majin Vegeta et Gotenks .
Mais il y a quelque trucs qui me gênent cela concernent les puissances Principalement celle de Buu qui est vraiment astronomique et aussi celle de CHiCHi et Videl tu as admis de t-être trompé car Videl n'a pas la même capacité que les Gohans Trunks et co et la puissance de Chichi est vraiment basse (76 je crois) beaucoup de personnage enfin des fans français disent que Chichi (contre Goku) est plus forte que videl alors que là sa puissance est ridicule car on peut supposer qu'elle a appris les arts martiaux a Goten donc qu'elle peut tenir (un petit peu ) contre quelqu'un qui est au alentours des 100 000 facile .
Dans un des 1 er chapitre tu parle que Vegeta donne une capsule a Gohan qui contient une machine pour voyager dans le temps avec des propriétés bien spécifique mais on n'en tant plus parler je trouve cela bizarre a moins que vu que ton histoire n'est pas fini tu te laisse une marche de manoeuvre.
It is well written, you resume the basics of manga with Majin Vegeta Gotenks.
But there are some things that annoy me Primarily this concerns the powers that Buu is really astronomical and also that of Chichi and Videl admitted you will be deceived because Videl does not have the same capacity as Trunks and Gohans co and power of Chichi is really low (76 I think) many French fans finally say Chichi character (against Goku) is stronger than videl while there his power is ridiculous because we can assume that she learned the Goten martial arts so she can hold (a little bit) against someone who is easy around 100,000.
In the 1 st chapter you talk Vegeta Gohan gives a capsule that contains a machine to travel back in time with very specific properties but no longer speak as I find it strange because unless your story n ' is not over you let you walk a maneuver.
1gabelou1991C'est bien ecrit, tu reprend les bases du manga avec Majin Vegeta et Gotenks .
Mais il y a quelque trucs qui me gênent cela concernent les puissances Principalement celle de Buu qui est vraiment astronomique et aussi celle de CHiCHi et Videl tu as admis de t-être trompé car Videl n'a pas la même capacité que les Gohans Trunks et co et la puissance de Chichi est vraiment basse (76 je crois) beaucoup de personnage enfin des fans français disent que Chichi (contre Goku) est plus forte que videl alors que là sa puissance est ridicule car on peut supposer qu'elle a appris les arts martiaux a Goten donc qu'elle peut tenir (un petit peu ) contre quelqu'un qui est au alentours des 100 000 facile .
Dans un des 1 er chapitre tu parle que Vegeta donne une capsule a Gohan qui contient une machine pour voyager dans le temps avec des propriétés bien spécifique mais on n'en tant plus parler je trouve cela bizarre a moins que vu que ton histoire n'est pas fini tu te laisse une marche de manoeuvre.
It is well written, you resume the basics of manga with Majin Vegeta Gotenks.
But there are some things that annoy me Primarily this concerns the powers that Buu is really astronomical and also that of Chichi and Videl admitted you will be deceived because Videl does not have the same capacity as Trunks and Gohans co and power of Chichi is really low (76 I think) many French fans finally say Chichi character (against Goku) is stronger than videl while there his power is ridiculous because we can assume that she learned the Goten martial arts so she can hold (a little bit) against someone who is easy around 100,000.
In the 1 st chapter you talk Vegeta Gohan gives a capsule that contains a machine to travel back in time with very specific properties but no longer speak as I find it strange because unless your story n ' is not over you let you walk a maneuver.
4/21/2015 c4 Vikram659
Great work man and the scientific theroy you add made this story more intersting.
Great work man and the scientific theroy you add made this story more intersting.
4/20/2015 c19 3Perfect Carnage
If I had known it was you, I would have gotten up much faster this morning.
I can't believe that you updated! I won't post the profanity said here, but it does express the surprise suitably.
The only twists I could think of that would really be out of field are Beerus a-coming or Gohan achieving SSJ5 like in AF. I would not expect either of those in 2 million years.
When you say more to come, do you mean for fanfics from you, because I would gladly read them.
-Perfect Carnage is so happy right now
3Perfect CarnageIf I had known it was you, I would have gotten up much faster this morning.
I can't believe that you updated! I won't post the profanity said here, but it does express the surprise suitably.
The only twists I could think of that would really be out of field are Beerus a-coming or Gohan achieving SSJ5 like in AF. I would not expect either of those in 2 million years.
When you say more to come, do you mean for fanfics from you, because I would gladly read them.
-Perfect Carnage is so happy right now
4/20/2015 c19 FloatingCow
Whoa! Great chapter, I am glad you are back!
Whoa! Great chapter, I am glad you are back!
4/20/2015 c19 5ShadowLDrago
All right, nice work Gotenks! It's scary how powerful the guy is, and how deadly he can be when he doesn't fool around Though Gotenks, if I were you, I'd shrink the sphere as small as you can possibly make it, and then fly into space and send it into the Sun, that's bound to annihilate Buu.
5ShadowLDragoAll right, nice work Gotenks! It's scary how powerful the guy is, and how deadly he can be when he doesn't fool around Though Gotenks, if I were you, I'd shrink the sphere as small as you can possibly make it, and then fly into space and send it into the Sun, that's bound to annihilate Buu.
2/25/2014 c8 woah
this buu is NOT this strong. Maybe super buu absorbed gohan is but not this guy.
this buu is NOT this strong. Maybe super buu absorbed gohan is but not this guy.
2/25/2014 c1 n
great!
great!
9/8/2013 c18 8The Keeper of Worlds
Wow, now this was straight up freaking intense! I can't wait to see how the next fight goes:)
8The Keeper of WorldsWow, now this was straight up freaking intense! I can't wait to see how the next fight goes:)
8/22/2013 c18 Ivan
I dont know if I ever reviewed your fic before, but I just wanted to say I love your fic so much. It deserves so much more reviews and im dying to see what happens to everyone and if Videl is actually permanently dead. I waited for months since march for new chapters, and it was well worth the wait :) Keep up thr good work :D
I dont know if I ever reviewed your fic before, but I just wanted to say I love your fic so much. It deserves so much more reviews and im dying to see what happens to everyone and if Videl is actually permanently dead. I waited for months since march for new chapters, and it was well worth the wait :) Keep up thr good work :D
8/21/2013 c18 Ivan
I dont know if I ever reviewed your fic before, but I just wanted to say I love your fic so much. It deserves so much more reviews and im dying to see what happens to everyone and if Videl is actually permanently dead. I waited for months since march for new chapters, and it was well worth the wait :) Keep up thr good work :D
I dont know if I ever reviewed your fic before, but I just wanted to say I love your fic so much. It deserves so much more reviews and im dying to see what happens to everyone and if Videl is actually permanently dead. I waited for months since march for new chapters, and it was well worth the wait :) Keep up thr good work :D