
7/1/2016 c1 Jiasen
Loved it great work.
Loved it great work.
12/15/2015 c1 Lophfgah
Please make more of these!
Please make more of these!
9/8/2013 c1
1Ranupi
Wow so dark but interesting! I feel really incomplete without Red saying how he felt :'( is there possibly going to be a sequel or extra? Anyways, I really enjoyed it!

Wow so dark but interesting! I feel really incomplete without Red saying how he felt :'( is there possibly going to be a sequel or extra? Anyways, I really enjoyed it!
6/22/2013 c1
1MoonLightAshura
That was hot...
I feel dirty xD
Need a sequel chapter ! They love each other but they don't even know it T.T
Sorry for bad english, I'm french :)

That was hot...
I feel dirty xD
Need a sequel chapter ! They love each other but they don't even know it T.T
Sorry for bad english, I'm french :)
6/8/2013 c1 sky-deleted2018
Holy crap. This, the story and the writing, was gripping and just completely amazing.
Are you going to continue? Please do ;-;
Holy crap. This, the story and the writing, was gripping and just completely amazing.
Are you going to continue? Please do ;-;
12/17/2012 c1
18Evie Warner
I felt SO bad for Green in this. Then I felt bad for Red .. it was one of those situations when you don't know who the real victim is. I liked dark Green, though :D
That rape scene was actually quite .. hot. Does that make me a bad person? Maybe it was something to do with the whole dominant dark Green thing you had going on ..
Anyways .. poor Green, poor Red .. I like to believe that they had a happy ending at some point :) It would be nice to read the light version, as well .. did your friend ever post it? xx

I felt SO bad for Green in this. Then I felt bad for Red .. it was one of those situations when you don't know who the real victim is. I liked dark Green, though :D
That rape scene was actually quite .. hot. Does that make me a bad person? Maybe it was something to do with the whole dominant dark Green thing you had going on ..
Anyways .. poor Green, poor Red .. I like to believe that they had a happy ending at some point :) It would be nice to read the light version, as well .. did your friend ever post it? xx
8/18/2012 c1 Rea
Aaaa
That was so hot! Damn hot! Fukkin hot! I looove your dark!Green! Awesomely possessive and sexy *shot* poor Red, though, but rape is rape, and Green/Red rape is...HAWT.
K, write more dark!Green :p I'll read it again. Heh.
Aaaa
That was so hot! Damn hot! Fukkin hot! I looove your dark!Green! Awesomely possessive and sexy *shot* poor Red, though, but rape is rape, and Green/Red rape is...HAWT.
K, write more dark!Green :p I'll read it again. Heh.
7/31/2012 c1 spectralhoe
Wow, Green is really dark here.. poor Red but what i wonderful story i love how jelouse Green was in the story. Anyway Great story!I love stories like these when Green is jelouse or dark
Wow, Green is really dark here.. poor Red but what i wonderful story i love how jelouse Green was in the story. Anyway Great story!I love stories like these when Green is jelouse or dark