for Taking the lead7/8/2013 c9 kahuna
Interesting story. You have some good ideas so I hope you'll continue to write.
Interesting story. You have some good ideas so I hope you'll continue to write.
7/8/2013 c9 
4IenvyBella
well all good things come to an end it was a good story just so :( that has to end loved every chapter
4IenvyBellawell all good things come to an end it was a good story just so :( that has to end loved every chapter
7/8/2013 c9 Guest
really good story i loved it
really good story i loved it
7/8/2013 c9 LadyMo
Thanks for the update. I like the ending. You leave it in a way that if you want a sequel you can do it. I enjoyed the story. Also glad Jack is taking the lead again. Thanks.
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Thanks for the update. I like the ending. You leave it in a way that if you want a sequel you can do it. I enjoyed the story. Also glad Jack is taking the lead again. Thanks.
:-)
7/8/2013 c9 Guest
Very nice! I hope there will be a sequal. Keep up the good writing. Now we need an encore
Very nice! I hope there will be a sequal. Keep up the good writing. Now we need an encore
7/8/2013 c9 smithcrafter
I rarely review every chapter of a story, but I enjoyed this entire story, so think of this as all nine chapter reviews.
I rarely review every chapter of a story, but I enjoyed this entire story, so think of this as all nine chapter reviews.
12/10/2012 c7 PatriciaS
Glad to see you are back, nice chapter. Going to be interesting to see how he's going to heal with his team now he's awake. Thanks for sharing.
Glad to see you are back, nice chapter. Going to be interesting to see how he's going to heal with his team now he's awake. Thanks for sharing.
12/10/2012 c7 LadyMo
A great chpater. He woke and did not remember all that happened and worried about his team. That is so Jack. Glad Jacob/Selmac was in time to help.
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A great chpater. He woke and did not remember all that happened and worried about his team. That is so Jack. Glad Jacob/Selmac was in time to help.
:-)
12/5/2012 c7 Guest
AWESOME! Thank you for another amazing chapter. Keep up the wonderful suspense. Compliments to your beta on a job well done. Hope to read more from you again SOON.
AWESOME! Thank you for another amazing chapter. Keep up the wonderful suspense. Compliments to your beta on a job well done. Hope to read more from you again SOON.
12/5/2012 c7 Jackless
Glad your back. Hope your exams went well. Can't wait for more, I am enjoying this story.
Glad your back. Hope your exams went well. Can't wait for more, I am enjoying this story.