for Battle of Champions3/13/2022 c1 Mr. Avocado
Wow, I definitely did not see that ending coming. Gotta love the plot twists
Wow, I definitely did not see that ending coming. Gotta love the plot twists
9/1/2020 c1 FyreDrakon
to see...this is where you started from, and now, eight years later, you've released the fifty-fourth chapter of the greatest pokemon fanfiction to ever exist...
to see...this is where you started from, and now, eight years later, you've released the fifty-fourth chapter of the greatest pokemon fanfiction to ever exist...
12/25/2016 c1 
1UsefulCriticOfGeniusFanfiction
YOU CAN DO BETTER THAN THIS!
(spoilers)
seriously. The Pikachu fight was kind of good, and really capitalized on his awesome speed and attacking power, but the whole first 4 battles might as well have been.
A attacks B
B attacks A
*both pokemon gritting through attacks*
A attacks B
B faints (or "b uses one last KO'ing attack before fainting.)
I KNOW you can write much better than this. If you are going to write something, write it to the best of your ability.
1UsefulCriticOfGeniusFanfictionYOU CAN DO BETTER THAN THIS!
(spoilers)
seriously. The Pikachu fight was kind of good, and really capitalized on his awesome speed and attacking power, but the whole first 4 battles might as well have been.
A attacks B
B attacks A
*both pokemon gritting through attacks*
A attacks B
B faints (or "b uses one last KO'ing attack before fainting.)
I KNOW you can write much better than this. If you are going to write something, write it to the best of your ability.
11/27/2016 c1 AsheNight
The ghost of Red...? Beautiful telling of the battle between them.
The ghost of Red...? Beautiful telling of the battle between them.
8/7/2016 c1 3SilverBlader
Never knew you wrote Red and Gold's battle. The best Pokemon writer on the net writing the best Pokemon battle from the games is something to see...
I never pictured Gold as the silent type, that's a first.
Gold could sense Red's presence–stop the presses the force is confirmed in Pokemon.
Jokes aside, that explains why everything around Mt. Silver owns you. It makes Mt. Silver even more menacing and intense.
Red's disappearance has always reminded me of the episode of Teen Titans in which Robin imagined the return of Slade only to find out he was just in his imagination.
Anyways, awesome one-shot.
3SilverBladerNever knew you wrote Red and Gold's battle. The best Pokemon writer on the net writing the best Pokemon battle from the games is something to see...
I never pictured Gold as the silent type, that's a first.
Gold could sense Red's presence–stop the presses the force is confirmed in Pokemon.
Jokes aside, that explains why everything around Mt. Silver owns you. It makes Mt. Silver even more menacing and intense.
Red's disappearance has always reminded me of the episode of Teen Titans in which Robin imagined the return of Slade only to find out he was just in his imagination.
Anyways, awesome one-shot.
6/10/2016 c1 77QUEENSPELLER67
I wonder what Pikachu had around his neck. That's creepy. Where did Red go?
Eagle.
77QUEENSPELLER67I wonder what Pikachu had around his neck. That's creepy. Where did Red go?
Eagle.
6/7/2016 c1 Hypocrite1
Just casually browsing your profile for more awesome stuff from you, ended up finding this masterpiece and I have to say Holy Shit. I'm guessing this was you just testing out your Pokemon writing skills but its still far better than anything I could write. I never freaking realized how awesome red was, especially this quite yet deadly version of him you wrote. Was red going easy? Cuz I feel like he could have rekt Ethan. Also that last part where Ethan says "his mom would probably want it back" are you implying that Red is Ethan's brother? Cuz that would also be pretty awesome.
Just casually browsing your profile for more awesome stuff from you, ended up finding this masterpiece and I have to say Holy Shit. I'm guessing this was you just testing out your Pokemon writing skills but its still far better than anything I could write. I never freaking realized how awesome red was, especially this quite yet deadly version of him you wrote. Was red going easy? Cuz I feel like he could have rekt Ethan. Also that last part where Ethan says "his mom would probably want it back" are you implying that Red is Ethan's brother? Cuz that would also be pretty awesome.
7/27/2015 c1 Guest
Where did red go?
Where did red go?
12/29/2014 c1 Guest
Your battle scenes are some of the best out there.
Your battle scenes are some of the best out there.
7/25/2014 c1 2minenking
After reading Traveler, I can tell your writing skills for battles have vastly improved from this. Still an intense battle however, better than anything I could write.
2minenkingAfter reading Traveler, I can tell your writing skills for battles have vastly improved from this. Still an intense battle however, better than anything I could write.
1/9/2014 c1 3Seas and Shadows
Dude, epic battle. Might sound stupid though, but in the manga, both Red and Gold are kinda joking around, sarcastic, hot headed, cocky... Wow. This version was QUIET.
Epic! Keep it up!
3Seas and ShadowsDude, epic battle. Might sound stupid though, but in the manga, both Red and Gold are kinda joking around, sarcastic, hot headed, cocky... Wow. This version was QUIET.
Epic! Keep it up!
9/9/2013 c1 1Nithalys
Now that's some powerful stuff! And that's one interesting twist here: Red vanishing completely from the face of Earth, letting both his pokemon and his stuff behind. That's some Ghost!Red or I don't know why and how he could do it. The interesting fact that he seemed to have changed the behavior of the wild pokemon by his mere presence was original as well. Keep up the good work with your stories! )
1NithalysNow that's some powerful stuff! And that's one interesting twist here: Red vanishing completely from the face of Earth, letting both his pokemon and his stuff behind. That's some Ghost!Red or I don't know why and how he could do it. The interesting fact that he seemed to have changed the behavior of the wild pokemon by his mere presence was original as well. Keep up the good work with your stories! )