Reviews: Betrayal | FanFiction

for Betrayal

11/3/2016 c2 Fawnspots
You spelled Sparkle wrong. :T

8/27/2012 c1 Hailstorm
Pretty good :D

8/26/2012 c9 DustyTear
Do cats blush?
Just wondering...

8/26/2012 c1 Sandydrops
Thanks! And just asking what happened to their dad?

8/26/2012 c9 Breezemist
You're writing seemed to have improved since the first chapter.

8/26/2012 c9 Sandydrops
do cats blush? anyway good story!

8/26/2012 c9

3Snowstar of Snowclan
good chappy

8/26/2012 c9 amashima
Why didn't you mention Rubyshine at all?

8/26/2012 c9 Aweticd
OOH! Rosepetal's going to go meet SkyClan!
Will she fall in love with Russet?
Wait... I TAKE THAT BACK! she gotta go with him! I demand so!

8/25/2012 c8

9Cindysong
Thanks!
Rosepetal's dream was cool, and this chapter was as good as a professional author! :D
Or is it just author...XD

8/25/2012 c8 amashima
Aw... I feel so sorry for Rosepetal

8/25/2012 c8 Aweticd
Woah... That's one creepy dream...

8/22/2012 c7 Hailey
Good fanfic and also i am soo sorry for not reviewing XD

8/22/2012 c1 Super Junior
It's kinda short but pretty good!
keep it up

8/22/2012 c7 amashima
I like the name Sweetfrost...
Anyways update soon!

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