for Vicissitude8/1 c6 yabdel2950
Yes! I would love if you were able to finish this it was a fairly interesting story!
Yes! I would love if you were able to finish this it was a fairly interesting story!
6/23/2023 c6 thor94
yes, i hope you will update this story soon and have pikachu continue what he started.
yes, i hope you will update this story soon and have pikachu continue what he started.
6/22/2023 c6 
8willtofish
Plesse do update! This chapter got me rereading the story and i fell back in love with it!
8willtofishPlesse do update! This chapter got me rereading the story and i fell back in love with it!
3/3/2021 c5 Aki Utsukushi
i love this i mean like it this is hard to find
(also kinda rare to see something like this too after all)
i love this i mean like it this is hard to find
(also kinda rare to see something like this too after all)
1/29/2016 c5 Fatin764
Continue! It's really good to see Pikachu as a human really handsome~and Ash is really cute. I need more Lemon part! Do your best and please update more!
Continue! It's really good to see Pikachu as a human really handsome~and Ash is really cute. I need more Lemon part! Do your best and please update more!
11/21/2015 c5 Neo
Really great story, PLEASE keep going.
Really great story, PLEASE keep going.
10/24/2015 c5 4Demonic girl111
(Stops my foot and whines like a brat) Pika and Ash haven't done the thingy-thing yeeeeet! Whyyyyyyy? And personally I think your writings still good, and I need more. I seriously love PikaXAsh yaoi fics and I can never find good ones. Yours is good and I plan to see it through the end. :) :D
4Demonic girl111(Stops my foot and whines like a brat) Pika and Ash haven't done the thingy-thing yeeeeet! Whyyyyyyy? And personally I think your writings still good, and I need more. I seriously love PikaXAsh yaoi fics and I can never find good ones. Yours is good and I plan to see it through the end. :) :D
10/3/2015 c5 Guest
Continue please it would make me so much more happier!️
Continue please it would make me so much more happier!️
7/2/2015 c5 3Kiiro Kiryo
I'm so addicted to this fanfiction. It's going in such a good direction that it'll be a waste for you to discontinue it! ** chapter 3 Oh Dawn, Brock, you guys just had to..
3Kiiro KiryoI'm so addicted to this fanfiction. It's going in such a good direction that it'll be a waste for you to discontinue it! ** chapter 3 Oh Dawn, Brock, you guys just had to..
6/3/2015 c5 cole
so good but i want more
so good but i want more
5/2/2015 c5 Darktomboykiller
Amazing story can u make more please!
Amazing story can u make more please!