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5/20/2013 c1 81Umeko
A short drabble which is charged with such intense emotion from Jack.
9/12/2012 c1 12ShahbanouScheherazade
I really loved this; it rises above the challenge you were answering. Your sentence is sheer poetry. I love the symbolism of each of the "three places" and how they reflect the aspects of his reaction to the ship. Well done!
8/1/2012 c1 Guest
Wow! Brilliant! Perfect for the picture prompt, and a wonderful sentence.
8/1/2012 c1 Guest
Hello pretty piratista and thank you so much for sharing this wonderful bit. Your lovely words made me all teary eyed, knocked my socks off. Poor poor Jack Sparrow, all there by himself and shown the Pearl in all her glory. Most excellent choice for treats miz sharks-pick of the litter. So glad to be reading something you've writ.
7/31/2012 c1 81mrspencil
Very skillfully put together, with some great images:-)
7/31/2012 c1 11sm.bean
"and the spot on hip where his pistol rides... the very metal stirs"
- A very chilling segment and my favorite part. A whole story in one well written sentence.
7/31/2012 c1 38Florencia7
Awesome! A full story in one sentence.
7/31/2012 c1 1qwertyuiop678
Awww... poor Jack... . He got there in the end... The Black Pearl is actually a pretty old ship, been sailing around for at least eighteen years, unless you count the resurrection bits as starting from new. That is hands down the LONGEST sentence I've ever seen. XD I congratulate you on managing to keep that from becoming a run-on sentence!

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