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2DannyPhantom619
I like this story too bad it wasn't it would have been awesome if this was DxE story especially when Danny complimented on her r just too many DxS and that couple it just overused and boring.
2DannyPhantom619I like this story too bad it wasn't it would have been awesome if this was DxE story especially when Danny complimented on her r just too many DxS and that couple it just overused and boring.
11/17/2012 c2 jxnki
Nice chapter. Nice freakishly long chapter. XD
Lol, I like all of the characters (especially James for some reason), but the girls are kind of... jerks. Heh...
Anyways, I can't wait for Amaranth to be in here and for you to update again! :D
Nice chapter. Nice freakishly long chapter. XD
Lol, I like all of the characters (especially James for some reason), but the girls are kind of... jerks. Heh...
Anyways, I can't wait for Amaranth to be in here and for you to update again! :D
11/17/2012 c2 8Nyx'sBlackRose
*bows* Thank you so much for including Mary in your story! It was great of you to let her win the group battle; I hope we'll be able to see more of her in other chapters. Please, update again soon! :)
8Nyx'sBlackRose*bows* Thank you so much for including Mary in your story! It was great of you to let her win the group battle; I hope we'll be able to see more of her in other chapters. Please, update again soon! :)
11/17/2012 c2 8ChopSuzi
*squee* That was AWESOME! I love it! Though, I am wondering when we're going to meet Dani. I'm pretty sure she's gonna have the same thing going on as Danny, but I won't be surprised if I'm wrong.
Anyways, absolutely FANTASTIC chapter, and I hope to read the next soon.
*frowns contemplatively* Also, I just noticed that my OC is the most plain-Jane and not powerful character out there; I feel boring... :/
8ChopSuzi*squee* That was AWESOME! I love it! Though, I am wondering when we're going to meet Dani. I'm pretty sure she's gonna have the same thing going on as Danny, but I won't be surprised if I'm wrong.
Anyways, absolutely FANTASTIC chapter, and I hope to read the next soon.
*frowns contemplatively* Also, I just noticed that my OC is the most plain-Jane and not powerful character out there; I feel boring... :/
9/20/2012 c1 8Nyx'sBlackRose
I don't know if you need any more Ocs for your story, but I'd like to submit mine anyways: I hope you'll like her.
Name: Rosemary Hayden
Nickname: Mary
Age: 17
Core: Plants
Specialized Power: Using energy to increase ghost plant's growth rates, potentially making them more powerful/dangerous.
Other Powers: Ability to change any plant material into a weapon by using her energy, control over any plant, flight, healing.
Appearance: Pale skin, deep green shoulder-length hair, deep purple eyes, tall, slim.
Normal Clothes: Denim vest, purple off the shoulders sweater, ankle-length denim skirt, purple ankle boots, silver rose necklace.
Ghost/Training Outfit(like Danny's when he transforms): Black kimono top with full sleeves and white trim, black choker with white gems, black leggings with white trim and white vine designs on the legs, black ankle boots with white buckles.
Personality: Shy and quiet around strangers; much kinder and protective around friends. Smart, gentle, sometimes temperamental.
Origin: Born in the human world; died at age 17 from sickness. Became a ghost somehow(she doesn't remember how), and attends the Ghost School; in her free time, she serves as an apprentice to the Ghost Writer(she's a bit less temperamental than he is).
Want to Stay Updated About Your OC's Involvement?: Yes/No: Yes, please, if you choose to have her.
8Nyx'sBlackRoseI don't know if you need any more Ocs for your story, but I'd like to submit mine anyways: I hope you'll like her.
Name: Rosemary Hayden
Nickname: Mary
Age: 17
Core: Plants
Specialized Power: Using energy to increase ghost plant's growth rates, potentially making them more powerful/dangerous.
Other Powers: Ability to change any plant material into a weapon by using her energy, control over any plant, flight, healing.
Appearance: Pale skin, deep green shoulder-length hair, deep purple eyes, tall, slim.
Normal Clothes: Denim vest, purple off the shoulders sweater, ankle-length denim skirt, purple ankle boots, silver rose necklace.
Ghost/Training Outfit(like Danny's when he transforms): Black kimono top with full sleeves and white trim, black choker with white gems, black leggings with white trim and white vine designs on the legs, black ankle boots with white buckles.
Personality: Shy and quiet around strangers; much kinder and protective around friends. Smart, gentle, sometimes temperamental.
Origin: Born in the human world; died at age 17 from sickness. Became a ghost somehow(she doesn't remember how), and attends the Ghost School; in her free time, she serves as an apprentice to the Ghost Writer(she's a bit less temperamental than he is).
Want to Stay Updated About Your OC's Involvement?: Yes/No: Yes, please, if you choose to have her.
9/16/2012 c1 1Fredrickson435
Hurray, its finally up and out. Nice job with the first chapter. Very good for being "not edited".
1Fredrickson435Hurray, its finally up and out. Nice job with the first chapter. Very good for being "not edited".
9/16/2012 c1 jxnki
Poor Danny... reading is not the enemy! Heh... great job on this, it's so freakishly long and detailed. *Is now awaiting the next update so I can read it before anyone else*
Haha, the perks of being a beta! ;D
Poor Danny... reading is not the enemy! Heh... great job on this, it's so freakishly long and detailed. *Is now awaiting the next update so I can read it before anyone else*
Haha, the perks of being a beta! ;D
9/16/2012 c1 8ChopSuzi
Alright! Looks promising so far.
Great opening and the perfect way to get most of the explaining out of the way.
Fantastic job! *Grins maniacally and gives a thumbs-up*
I anxiously await your next chapter! :D
8ChopSuziAlright! Looks promising so far.
Great opening and the perfect way to get most of the explaining out of the way.
Fantastic job! *Grins maniacally and gives a thumbs-up*
I anxiously await your next chapter! :D
9/16/2012 c2 5MsFrizzle
When I read the Oedipus part I couldn't help thinking of the Tom Lehere version. Very Funny.
5MsFrizzleWhen I read the Oedipus part I couldn't help thinking of the Tom Lehere version. Very Funny.
8/2/2012 c1 13tediz-leader
While I have two OC's that could work as faculty, they're the Greek gods Hades and Persephone, and i just want to know if you would be okay with them or if you would rather a different oc for your story.
13tediz-leaderWhile I have two OC's that could work as faculty, they're the Greek gods Hades and Persephone, and i just want to know if you would be okay with them or if you would rather a different oc for your story.
8/2/2012 c1 CreepySheepy
Core: Elemental (earth, air, fire, water), ice, electricity, plant, magic, technology, psychic (mental), or weather:psychic
Specialized Power:Mind controll
Other Powers:telling the future, psychic engery beams, love spell
Appearance: Eyes (ghost-purple, human-icy blue), hair (ghost-pink, human-blonde), height (short), skin (pale), ethnicity (German, Scottish, Polish), clothing (ghost-pink silk scarf, purple silk dress, black pants, pink flats; human-blue hat, white oversized shirt with a black tank top underneath, jean shorts, brown boots)
Personality:Intelligent in grades, a bit thick in common sense, anger issues
Origin:She was turned almost half ghost when she was enjected with ectoplasm. She also became psychic. She likes causing trouble and hates Danny
Level of Ghostliness: (For halfa's only)43% ghost 57% human
Class: (For teachers only) Core development, power training, or adaptive fighting
Want to Stay Updated About Your OC's Involvement?: Yes/No:yes
Core: Elemental (earth, air, fire, water), ice, electricity, plant, magic, technology, psychic (mental), or weather:psychic
Specialized Power:Mind controll
Other Powers:telling the future, psychic engery beams, love spell
Appearance: Eyes (ghost-purple, human-icy blue), hair (ghost-pink, human-blonde), height (short), skin (pale), ethnicity (German, Scottish, Polish), clothing (ghost-pink silk scarf, purple silk dress, black pants, pink flats; human-blue hat, white oversized shirt with a black tank top underneath, jean shorts, brown boots)
Personality:Intelligent in grades, a bit thick in common sense, anger issues
Origin:She was turned almost half ghost when she was enjected with ectoplasm. She also became psychic. She likes causing trouble and hates Danny
Level of Ghostliness: (For halfa's only)43% ghost 57% human
Class: (For teachers only) Core development, power training, or adaptive fighting
Want to Stay Updated About Your OC's Involvement?: Yes/No:yes