for Bleeding Roses10/8/2016 c1 Guest
Boring. If you need to do a bio for your OCs, you're pretty crap at writing. But I read a few more chapters and almost died from lack of originality and boredom.
Do you know what talent looks like? Not this.
Boring. If you need to do a bio for your OCs, you're pretty crap at writing. But I read a few more chapters and almost died from lack of originality and boredom.
Do you know what talent looks like? Not this.
9/23/2015 c43 Guest
I get why dee changed to ellis... but why did iggy switch to nick? Is there a particular purpose for that ? Great chapter tho
I get why dee changed to ellis... but why did iggy switch to nick? Is there a particular purpose for that ? Great chapter tho
9/3/2015 c43 
33CreatureHanstran
Long chapters are always better! This story is by far one of my favorites
33CreatureHanstranLong chapters are always better! This story is by far one of my favorites
7/4/2015 c42 Guest
The addition of a new character didn't add anything good (save the supplies run), and the slower pace is a jarring, surprising change from the first 30-something chapters. Some things would need to be explained before the story makes more sense. Such as the reason they decided to keep confetti girl when she clearly didnt want to go, a reason to why anyone left her in the first place and no one else took her, why their taking a rest day or two when they need to be hurrying, why Alpha is suddenly okay with her, not to even mention about the other pack of hunters and where they come from.
The addition of a new character didn't add anything good (save the supplies run), and the slower pace is a jarring, surprising change from the first 30-something chapters. Some things would need to be explained before the story makes more sense. Such as the reason they decided to keep confetti girl when she clearly didnt want to go, a reason to why anyone left her in the first place and no one else took her, why their taking a rest day or two when they need to be hurrying, why Alpha is suddenly okay with her, not to even mention about the other pack of hunters and where they come from.
6/24/2015 c42 CreatureHanstran
Haha, raptors... I haven't seen the new Jurassic Park movie, but I heard it was good...
Great chapter, I laughed at the beginning with Iggy and Alpha
Haha, raptors... I haven't seen the new Jurassic Park movie, but I heard it was good...
Great chapter, I laughed at the beginning with Iggy and Alpha
6/23/2015 c42 Seven
Nice chapter from the both of you
Nice chapter from the both of you
6/8/2015 c41 Seven
Saw that post on Tumblr, too. Of course I follow this story, it's a great story
Saw that post on Tumblr, too. Of course I follow this story, it's a great story
6/8/2015 c41 Seven
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
6/4/2015 c41 CreatureHanstran
Rule 31: Enjoy the little things...
Great chapter, at the beginning when you wrote "for the first time in forever" i kinda had a Frozen moment... It happens :)
Rule 31: Enjoy the little things...
Great chapter, at the beginning when you wrote "for the first time in forever" i kinda had a Frozen moment... It happens :)
5/25/2015 c39 CreatureHanstran
Awesome chapter! Its hard to believe that ive been reading this since the beginning!
Awesome chapter! Its hard to believe that ive been reading this since the beginning!
5/25/2015 c39 Guest
This is great! ...except for once Iggy came in the story dropped. What was the point of adding another character when it was going great until you did?
This is great! ...except for once Iggy came in the story dropped. What was the point of adding another character when it was going great until you did?
5/6/2015 c39 Guest
I cant wait for more!
I cant wait for more!
5/3/2015 c39 Seven
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
3/28/2015 c38 CreatureHanstran
Great chapter, its amazing that ive been following this story since chapter one and how awesome it has progressed! Keep up the good work
Great chapter, its amazing that ive been following this story since chapter one and how awesome it has progressed! Keep up the good work