
12/8/2013 c1
17BlackCatNeko999
Aww, this was perfect and I loved and enjoyed every single word of it. Thank you for such a great story!

Aww, this was perfect and I loved and enjoyed every single word of it. Thank you for such a great story!
8/4/2012 c1
185sapphireswimming
How? How are you able to write this so perfectly and in character and making me want to just burst out into emotional Tokka tears?
I love it.
The banter. The humor. The hurt. The emotion. The questions.
It was all perfect.
SO PERFECT.
And Aang's awkward don't crush the tiny baby hug made me laugh aloud. XD
Also. the hippopatomas sloth was perhaps the most hilariously beautiful animal ever to exist in this universe. It's sooooooooooo perfect. Goodness.
I'm so glad you're writing some! :3 And it looks like you're starting to get a bit of a following for Avatar fics.

How? How are you able to write this so perfectly and in character and making me want to just burst out into emotional Tokka tears?
I love it.
The banter. The humor. The hurt. The emotion. The questions.
It was all perfect.
SO PERFECT.
And Aang's awkward don't crush the tiny baby hug made me laugh aloud. XD
Also. the hippopatomas sloth was perhaps the most hilariously beautiful animal ever to exist in this universe. It's sooooooooooo perfect. Goodness.
I'm so glad you're writing some! :3 And it looks like you're starting to get a bit of a following for Avatar fics.
8/4/2012 c1
34egyouppt
this is wonderful. and it captures everything i love about the relationship between sokka and toph perfectly. even if sokka isn't lin's biological father, i have no doubt he had a presence in her life, and an important one. and the way you wrote the beginning of that is beautiful. also love sokka using toph's competitive nature to help her during her birthing process. excellent job.

this is wonderful. and it captures everything i love about the relationship between sokka and toph perfectly. even if sokka isn't lin's biological father, i have no doubt he had a presence in her life, and an important one. and the way you wrote the beginning of that is beautiful. also love sokka using toph's competitive nature to help her during her birthing process. excellent job.
8/2/2012 c1
5toffeecakesxox
so perfect. literally tearing up! i reblogged this on tumblr, but UGH my FEELS so perfect (':

so perfect. literally tearing up! i reblogged this on tumblr, but UGH my FEELS so perfect (':
8/2/2012 c1
1Muggle Minx
This was so amazing. You're right, no matter who Lin's father is, Sokka is one of the men who would always be around Lin. Such cuteness, and I can't wait for more.

This was so amazing. You're right, no matter who Lin's father is, Sokka is one of the men who would always be around Lin. Such cuteness, and I can't wait for more.