for A Whirlwind Love Affair5/7/2013 c1 TJ Jordan
The script writers need to take a few notes from how you do things. Great work! I love the love moments between David and Millie!
The script writers need to take a few notes from how you do things. Great work! I love the love moments between David and Millie!
4/14/2013 c1 
24TJ Jordan
Another great story! Nice!
AWESOME JOB! I love it! Despite being a boy and all, I kinda have a heart for romance stories. At least they have nice endings.
Anyway, great job! I love the whole thing between Millie and David! They really do love each other!
24TJ JordanAnother great story! Nice!
AWESOME JOB! I love it! Despite being a boy and all, I kinda have a heart for romance stories. At least they have nice endings.
Anyway, great job! I love the whole thing between Millie and David! They really do love each other!
8/15/2012 c1 73FEARLESS MASTER
Marie, you always surprise me by adding little snippets of sex at the end of your fics. That aside, this whole fic was charming. I could instantly feel the warmth and atmosphere of Wei Ki Ki as I read. I am kinda jelous now, I wanna go to Hawaii!
Awesome work!
73FEARLESS MASTERMarie, you always surprise me by adding little snippets of sex at the end of your fics. That aside, this whole fic was charming. I could instantly feel the warmth and atmosphere of Wei Ki Ki as I read. I am kinda jelous now, I wanna go to Hawaii!
Awesome work!