for Today's my bday!4/10/2013 c1 WtF
When I read this, I could feel my brain cells dying. Please never write again.
When I read this, I could feel my brain cells dying. Please never write again.
9/12/2012 c1 Call Me Lolla
What is this?
This is NOT a one-shot. It isn't even a STORY.
And in these EIGHTY-EIGHT WORDS I find twelve mistakes, can you believe it?
Please, just get a blog or something and stop polluting our fanfiction world. I know you want to be a good writer but at LEAST come up with something relevant to fanfiction.
And what the heck? Zombies? Just what was their role in this so-called story?
And "bday" is spelled BIRTHDAY; we're using computers now and I don't see why typing so badly is necessary considering the size of the keyboard.
I don't even know WHY I'm bothering to review this. Take this trashy piece off this site. NOW.
What is this?
This is NOT a one-shot. It isn't even a STORY.
And in these EIGHTY-EIGHT WORDS I find twelve mistakes, can you believe it?
Please, just get a blog or something and stop polluting our fanfiction world. I know you want to be a good writer but at LEAST come up with something relevant to fanfiction.
And what the heck? Zombies? Just what was their role in this so-called story?
And "bday" is spelled BIRTHDAY; we're using computers now and I don't see why typing so badly is necessary considering the size of the keyboard.
I don't even know WHY I'm bothering to review this. Take this trashy piece off this site. NOW.
8/7/2012 c1 
12BritishWaffleSyrup
It's good, but mayhaps it needs some grammar and spelling corrections. And maybe it could be longer. I'm not saying it's bad, trust me.
12BritishWaffleSyrupIt's good, but mayhaps it needs some grammar and spelling corrections. And maybe it could be longer. I'm not saying it's bad, trust me.