for A Powerful Crew4/4/2021 c1 Guest
Just want to say stop putting this is not a Yaoi in summary of your works it’s homophobic and annoying, instead either put no Slash or nothing at all.
Just want to say stop putting this is not a Yaoi in summary of your works it’s homophobic and annoying, instead either put no Slash or nothing at all.
3/16/2015 c7 Snuggle
I like it a lot I am not big on the whole criticism of this but the overall I like the story and hopefully you will be making more chapter
I like it a lot I am not big on the whole criticism of this but the overall I like the story and hopefully you will be making more chapter
1/22/2015 c7 Coyotegirl212
this chapter is Hilarious XD your awesome your whole story is great but the "prepare for war dinner" is one of the funniest things i have ever red XD
this chapter is Hilarious XD your awesome your whole story is great but the "prepare for war dinner" is one of the funniest things i have ever red XD
4/29/2014 c2 Interesteddude
Luffy does not talk like that nor does he do that actually commanding. The one commanding is usually Nami.
And Zoro rarely talks let alone give the whole backstory of the crew.
Luffy does not talk like that nor does he do that actually commanding. The one commanding is usually Nami.
And Zoro rarely talks let alone give the whole backstory of the crew.
11/20/2013 c4 
2Embrasia
I loved the line when Halibel is wondering what else Ichigo could do with his mouth. HOT! I loved how romantic this chapter was. And the ending was good and suspenseful.
2EmbrasiaI loved the line when Halibel is wondering what else Ichigo could do with his mouth. HOT! I loved how romantic this chapter was. And the ending was good and suspenseful.
11/14/2013 c3 Embrasia
I love how vividly you describe this cloud world. I felt like I was on that ship. My favorite part was Ichigo and Halibel's little conversation. This one is my absolute favorite of your three fics! It has action, romance, and comedy. Its the total packaage :)
-Embrasia-
I love how vividly you describe this cloud world. I felt like I was on that ship. My favorite part was Ichigo and Halibel's little conversation. This one is my absolute favorite of your three fics! It has action, romance, and comedy. Its the total packaage :)
-Embrasia-
10/2/2013 c1 Doctor Dandy
I won't be reading further. Your lack of attention to proper grammar, punctuation and capitalization is a massive turn off and makes this story difficult to read.
- Thorndsword
I won't be reading further. Your lack of attention to proper grammar, punctuation and capitalization is a massive turn off and makes this story difficult to read.
- Thorndsword