for Forever Etched In Her Skin12/2/2015 c1 Frostfire2382
Loved it so much. you should keep going
Loved it so much. you should keep going
6/4/2014 c1 
6DoodlebugQT Writes
Ooh.
Instant interest.
Like if you continued.
Not required though.
It was horrifyingly delightful.
Very good.
6DoodlebugQT WritesOoh.
Instant interest.
Like if you continued.
Not required though.
It was horrifyingly delightful.
Very good.
8/8/2012 c1 Maddag
cool!
cool!
8/4/2012 c1 sum
I like it
I like it
8/5/2012 c1 Snapesbloodredneko
Interesting would like to see more or another story like this but longer
Interesting would like to see more or another story like this but longer
8/4/2012 c1 redskittlsbaby3
Oooohhhh cruelty! This iss goood but soooooooo bloody short. I its fir the contest and what not, but u should make it longer, like go back to thr beggining of the story and have that be the end or start fomr there and tells what's happend since then . This would be soooo gooo!
But this is a good short one-shot.
Oooohhhh cruelty! This iss goood but soooooooo bloody short. I its fir the contest and what not, but u should make it longer, like go back to thr beggining of the story and have that be the end or start fomr there and tells what's happend since then . This would be soooo gooo!
But this is a good short one-shot.