for True Potential9/19 c55 Guest
It's disappointing Naruto feels so dumb, like his canon level of stupidity just without the skill. It makes him an unbearably annoying character that's usually at the head of tedious exposition. It makes it hard to like him.
It's disappointing Naruto feels so dumb, like his canon level of stupidity just without the skill. It makes him an unbearably annoying character that's usually at the head of tedious exposition. It makes it hard to like him.
9/19 c55 Guest
I'm sorry... What!? Drilling air bullets, one enhanced with bijuu chakra, should of tore hid and apart. You're seriously underestimating the damage these jutsu do. You seriously can't expect to just make that attack shove hidan a couple steps. A literally push can do that. You telling me a push does more damage that highly compressed kyuubi infused wind chakra .
I'm sorry... What!? Drilling air bullets, one enhanced with bijuu chakra, should of tore hid and apart. You're seriously underestimating the damage these jutsu do. You seriously can't expect to just make that attack shove hidan a couple steps. A literally push can do that. You telling me a push does more damage that highly compressed kyuubi infused wind chakra .
8/26 c88 eddiemced
Aaaand like that any amount of sympathy I had for the Bee Movie afficionado bitch has been completely burned, atomized and buried in the earth's core. I hope it's a painful end and filled with sweet catharsis.
Aaaand like that any amount of sympathy I had for the Bee Movie afficionado bitch has been completely burned, atomized and buried in the earth's core. I hope it's a painful end and filled with sweet catharsis.
8/25 c86 eddiemced
Man... Danzou is like that one piece of weed that always ruins every beautiful garden due to one small issue: fucking up everything it touches. Also, is it bad that I actually feel stuff towards the Kamizuru? Like, they're not horrible people, they are just stuck in the past, and now they have a REASON to stay that way, all thanks to Grumpy ol' "I'ma fuck every situation up because I didn't get chosen to be hokage because I'd literally destroy the village with 20 consecutive wars if I had the title" Danzo. Loved the chapter, by the way
Man... Danzou is like that one piece of weed that always ruins every beautiful garden due to one small issue: fucking up everything it touches. Also, is it bad that I actually feel stuff towards the Kamizuru? Like, they're not horrible people, they are just stuck in the past, and now they have a REASON to stay that way, all thanks to Grumpy ol' "I'ma fuck every situation up because I didn't get chosen to be hokage because I'd literally destroy the village with 20 consecutive wars if I had the title" Danzo. Loved the chapter, by the way
8/22 c24 Awesome
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8/8 c46 Birdly The Reaper Of Souls
Sure you might get hate mail.. but juat because some end up hate your story dont mean they wont love another that you made
Example vsnake... sure you can have a few can not like... and some you enjoy reading.. the point
Never stop writing sure you can get hate mail and bad reviews... but at the same tike they can end up liking another one of your storys with good mail and good review...
Sure you might get hate mail.. but juat because some end up hate your story dont mean they wont love another that you made
Example vsnake... sure you can have a few can not like... and some you enjoy reading.. the point
Never stop writing sure you can get hate mail and bad reviews... but at the same tike they can end up liking another one of your storys with good mail and good review...
8/8 c45 Birdly The Reaper Of Souls
Should of skip reading that chapter... now i know why i stop reading... honesty.. the whole heart seal is a dick move...
Pointless oc death
Should of skip reading that chapter... now i know why i stop reading... honesty.. the whole heart seal is a dick move...
Pointless oc death
8/8 c10 MagicAl12
Hello! I have been going about a lot lately, trying to find good Naruto and Hinata fics partially out of just wanting to read some good shippng fics, and partially out of a desire to get an idea on some inspiration and ideas to NOT do to copy others and make my own massive project original.
I have to commend you as this is one of the first to make me it back and actually want to rework some of my plans to shameless steal one of your ideas (Hinata as an archer), and I have been getting more and more invested the more I read.
I have only finished Chapter 10, with the finishing of the Iwa introduction, but I was clapping as I read Han's reevaluation of humans and the dénoûment of the arc.
I usually make it a point to finish reading a story before I favorite and review, but i somehow get the feeling thats going to take a couple years. XD
its not everday you find a fic that you know is going to be a great one not even a third of the way through, let alone one that's been updating and going on for so long!
I commend you! I'm definitely playing catchup on this!
Hello! I have been going about a lot lately, trying to find good Naruto and Hinata fics partially out of just wanting to read some good shippng fics, and partially out of a desire to get an idea on some inspiration and ideas to NOT do to copy others and make my own massive project original.
I have to commend you as this is one of the first to make me it back and actually want to rework some of my plans to shameless steal one of your ideas (Hinata as an archer), and I have been getting more and more invested the more I read.
I have only finished Chapter 10, with the finishing of the Iwa introduction, but I was clapping as I read Han's reevaluation of humans and the dénoûment of the arc.
I usually make it a point to finish reading a story before I favorite and review, but i somehow get the feeling thats going to take a couple years. XD
its not everday you find a fic that you know is going to be a great one not even a third of the way through, let alone one that's been updating and going on for so long!
I commend you! I'm definitely playing catchup on this!
8/8 c41 Birdly The Reaper Of Souls
"I really, really am too old for this shit.'
Lol poor third hokage...
"I really, really am too old for this shit.'
Lol poor third hokage...
8/3 c1 Guest
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7/3 c25 TheGoodDoctor13
Man I think Lee should've won tbh. He's certainly stronger than Sasuke and didn't even use any of the gates yet but I guess taking advantage of him having damaged chakra coils with a genjutsu makes sense, it's just anticlimactic
Man I think Lee should've won tbh. He's certainly stronger than Sasuke and didn't even use any of the gates yet but I guess taking advantage of him having damaged chakra coils with a genjutsu makes sense, it's just anticlimactic
7/3 c15 TheGoodDoctor13
Did Gaara kill Karin? It showed him killing 2 kusa genin and says he killed the 3rd so unless Karin wasn't in the exams in this or there's more than one kusa team then I'm assuming Gaara killed her. That's a shame
Did Gaara kill Karin? It showed him killing 2 kusa genin and says he killed the 3rd so unless Karin wasn't in the exams in this or there's more than one kusa team then I'm assuming Gaara killed her. That's a shame