for OPERATION: Break the Dawn9/14/2022 c26 Beatriz06
Felicidades por el premio! Este fic es con diferencia el mejor que he leído! Eres increíble! Me atrapó como una película!
A título personal, me encantaría una secuela donde podamos ver a Bella en acción con el equipo después del entrenamiento o algo sobre su vida familiar! Ayyyyyy no se! Me vale todo de estos personajes! Los he amado!
Gracias por el tiempo que dedicas a escribir para nosotros! El tiempo no tiene precio!
Ahora te escribo como Beatriz06 , antes era Bea!
Te sigo!
Felicidades por el premio! Este fic es con diferencia el mejor que he leído! Eres increíble! Me atrapó como una película!
A título personal, me encantaría una secuela donde podamos ver a Bella en acción con el equipo después del entrenamiento o algo sobre su vida familiar! Ayyyyyy no se! Me vale todo de estos personajes! Los he amado!
Gracias por el tiempo que dedicas a escribir para nosotros! El tiempo no tiene precio!
Ahora te escribo como Beatriz06 , antes era Bea!
Te sigo!
9/10/2022 c26 Bea
Ohhhh por dios! Muero por una secuela y ver a Bella en marcha toda entrenada! Me has hecho disfrutar de leer algo tan interesante y bien escrito! Gracias de corazón! Si te animas a una secuela...encantada de leer!?
Ohhhh por dios! Muero por una secuela y ver a Bella en marcha toda entrenada! Me has hecho disfrutar de leer algo tan interesante y bien escrito! Gracias de corazón! Si te animas a una secuela...encantada de leer!?
9/10/2022 c25 Bea
Lindo momento y bien merecido!
Lindo momento y bien merecido!
9/10/2022 c23 Bea
Ya terminaron con esa gentuza! Por fin...
Ya terminaron con esa gentuza! Por fin...
9/10/2022 c22 Bea
Ay dios! ... cuánta tensión!
Ay dios! ... cuánta tensión!
9/10/2022 c20 Bea
Ahhhhhh me matas!
Ahhhhhh me matas!
9/10/2022 c19 Bea
Asombrosa historia! Te sigo
Asombrosa historia! Te sigo
9/9/2022 c7 Bea
Dios mío! Pedazo de historia! Estoy leyendo y pensando que cuando a abe este, espero con ansias una secuela!
Dios mío! Pedazo de historia! Estoy leyendo y pensando que cuando a abe este, espero con ansias una secuela!
9/4/2022 c26 
13arthemys
Great story! I was enthralled! The action was good, and the romance in the desert even more ;) Thanks for a great work!
13arthemysGreat story! I was enthralled! The action was good, and the romance in the desert even more ;) Thanks for a great work!
8/15/2022 c26 1insomniacinsanity
Never read a fic set during combat before! Really great work with all of your research!
1insomniacinsanityNever read a fic set during combat before! Really great work with all of your research!
8/5/2022 c26 Elis5
Wow! What a story, it was like watching an action movie, so detailed and such amazing storyline!
I absolutely loved reading every word and I loved how you payed with the tempo of your storysuper fast and energetic action scenes and slow and steady buildup… the relationship chapters are my absolute favorite, among all the chaos, nerves and tension those quite and peaceful moments just for the two of them, to solidify their connectionsooo precious! And when the time finally came for them to be together, it was like fireworks, just so right and appropriateYour story is definitely worthy of being published and be an actual source for the movie, it’s very complex, complete and just for everybody who loves action, romance, friendly banter, mystery and adventure! I’m so glad I found it)
There are so many things that I lovedthe dynamic within the team, Eli (definitely one of my favorites), the Deltas, the General, and the atmosphere that you built around, native language, connection with historical events and glossary, every little detail was covered!
Thank you so much for putting so much effort, heart and soul into it! I can’t wait to read more from youP.S. Maybe just maybe we can get a sequel?I would love to read more about their team with a new member operate, maybe some more of relationship between Alice and Jasper and I would love to meet Esme and get a bit more of their family dynamicWith love,
Wow! What a story, it was like watching an action movie, so detailed and such amazing storyline!
I absolutely loved reading every word and I loved how you payed with the tempo of your storysuper fast and energetic action scenes and slow and steady buildup… the relationship chapters are my absolute favorite, among all the chaos, nerves and tension those quite and peaceful moments just for the two of them, to solidify their connectionsooo precious! And when the time finally came for them to be together, it was like fireworks, just so right and appropriateYour story is definitely worthy of being published and be an actual source for the movie, it’s very complex, complete and just for everybody who loves action, romance, friendly banter, mystery and adventure! I’m so glad I found it)
There are so many things that I lovedthe dynamic within the team, Eli (definitely one of my favorites), the Deltas, the General, and the atmosphere that you built around, native language, connection with historical events and glossary, every little detail was covered!
Thank you so much for putting so much effort, heart and soul into it! I can’t wait to read more from youP.S. Maybe just maybe we can get a sequel?I would love to read more about their team with a new member operate, maybe some more of relationship between Alice and Jasper and I would love to meet Esme and get a bit more of their family dynamicWith love,
7/17/2022 c17 Anton M
Beautiful! Just beautiful. I don't have words.
Need to go to sleep today. Will be back!
Thank you thank you thank you!
Beautiful! Just beautiful. I don't have words.
Need to go to sleep today. Will be back!
Thank you thank you thank you!
7/14/2022 c16 Anton M
Not much time to read today, but love the chapter. Especially Bella's revelations about the second lab.
Not much time to read today, but love the chapter. Especially Bella's revelations about the second lab.
7/13/2022 c15 12Anton M
Absolutely trivial comments ahead! You've been warned.
Omg, I want to tell you how much I adore a fic using military time (as it should, haha!). As you know, most of Europe uses military time by default (except nobody calls it that), and writing AM/PM in fic makes my eye twitch (haha). Wish I could use military time casually like we do in RL.
Another thing is metres! Yay! And then yards, damn. But obviously necessary. International environments just call for those kinds of differences.
Also, when I saw you measure distance as “a football field away” (in a previous chapter), I got a huge grin. That’s the most American expression I’ve ever heard of and I love it! (Why yes, I am very easy to please.)
Love the plot, characters & E&B’s moments together. Brilliant stuff.
12Anton MAbsolutely trivial comments ahead! You've been warned.
Omg, I want to tell you how much I adore a fic using military time (as it should, haha!). As you know, most of Europe uses military time by default (except nobody calls it that), and writing AM/PM in fic makes my eye twitch (haha). Wish I could use military time casually like we do in RL.
Another thing is metres! Yay! And then yards, damn. But obviously necessary. International environments just call for those kinds of differences.
Also, when I saw you measure distance as “a football field away” (in a previous chapter), I got a huge grin. That’s the most American expression I’ve ever heard of and I love it! (Why yes, I am very easy to please.)
Love the plot, characters & E&B’s moments together. Brilliant stuff.
7/13/2022 c14 Anton M
You know, whenever the main couple has these moments (e.g. the apple sharing), sometimes you see readers get annoyed that they don't start humping each other immediately (lol). I don't blame anyone for getting impatient but I just... I always LOVE it when the couple has moments and nothing's been said/defined yet. It's the best. Every story that does that just touches my heart. Thank you.
You know, whenever the main couple has these moments (e.g. the apple sharing), sometimes you see readers get annoyed that they don't start humping each other immediately (lol). I don't blame anyone for getting impatient but I just... I always LOVE it when the couple has moments and nothing's been said/defined yet. It's the best. Every story that does that just touches my heart. Thank you.