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4/12/2024 c26 supergirl1313
Stumbled upon this beauty a few days back and absolutely devoured it! Finished up yesterday but I can't stop thinking about it. This is so well written and fully absorbing. You are really gifted. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us !
4/9/2024 c27 Rue1921
This was quite an interesting read. It stretched my imagination and showed a bad ass team. Loved the story can't wait to read the sequel! Great job!
3/31/2024 c27 2NKubie
Woooo hooooo! I'm excited and it looks like I have some chapters to catch up on. I'm a little nervous about cliffhangers, though. That's the risk of reading a WIP. But I may just take that risk. :)

I do have a question, though: Bella aside (it would be a given) do you think the charcters of The Cleaner could kick the asses of their OBtD counterparts? Not easily, of course, but maybe? Or are they equally matched? What are your thoughts, Kate? I'd love to know!

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan

P.S. I'm still not sure I have the guts to read the outtake. Maybe someday.
3/31/2024 c26 NKubie
Woo hoo for fictional timelines! They certainly deserved those awards! And hell, this whole fandom started with vampires and werewolves, so we uf we can't suspend our disbelief for this, what kind of crappy readers are we?! Lol

This has been such an exciting ride! I'm looking forward to the next!

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/31/2024 c25 NKubie
Bella's bored, huh? Well, there's a cure for that. Hopefully, she's a go, thanks to fictional job opportunities...and healing for Edward. ;)
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Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/31/2024 c19 GorGirl
Oh man! She fell right into it. Wasn't anyone watching that side?
3/31/2024 c18 GorGirl
Glad Emmett seems okay! I guess she knows Edward's intentions now.
3/31/2024 c24 NKubie
Their version of happily ever after is a little different than the rest of us. And I love that Edward isn't even trying to hide his relationship with Bella anymore. Actually, he didn't hide it that well before. LOL

And the interaction between Edward and Rose is priceless!

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/30/2024 c15 GorGirl
What a beautiful setting with the stars shining bright.
3/30/2024 c14 GorGirl
So, Aro, James and Victoria?
3/30/2024 c23 NKubie
Wow! That was exciting!

And once again, I'm SO glad I'm not reading this as a WIP! I forgot that Emmett is the medic in the gruop. And yet, he still makes me smile with his words and attitude.

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/29/2024 c12 GorGirl
Holy shit! They'll definitely know they're there now!
3/29/2024 c22 NKubie
As much as I'm sure (pretty sure) you wouldn't actually kill off Edward, my increased anxiety had me reading a bit ahead. Boy, am I glad I didn't read this as a WIP! Lol

Also, I adored that reunion. This chapter earned a bookmark for a favorite chapter. Thank you!

I'm also thrilled that those bunch of maniacs are dead! Good riddance!

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/28/2024 c21 NKubie
James cannot die fast enough! What a piece of shit! And in the grand scheme of things, he could hurt Bella so much worse. Please let Edward kill Walker before that happens!

As for Spetznas, I have no sympathy for him at all! I may want Edward to find and free Bella so they can have their HEA!

Also, I'm so impressed with Alice's leadership, but I love even more that she hates Edward's job. Lol

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/28/2024 c20 NKubie
I know what Bella is trying to do, but I still think she should activate that locator soonet rather than later.

As for Edward, there was never any doubt that he'd go to rescue Bella personally.

I'm not sure I have the guts to read that outtake, but I'll never say never.

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
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