for OPERATION: Break the Dawn8/9/2012 c1 Annabelle
I love what you have done so far, your writing style is great and flows really well. I was actually disappointed to find only one chapter, so can't wait to read the next one. Hope Bella is spunky and can hold her own! :)
I love what you have done so far, your writing style is great and flows really well. I was actually disappointed to find only one chapter, so can't wait to read the next one. Hope Bella is spunky and can hold her own! :)
8/8/2012 c1 lynnpepper77
So excited for this one! I have been anxiously waiting since you said you would be writing it:) Awesome first chapter, just enough to get me intrigued. Looking forward to the ride!
So excited for this one! I have been anxiously waiting since you said you would be writing it:) Awesome first chapter, just enough to get me intrigued. Looking forward to the ride!
8/8/2012 c1 Cared Cullen
I'm along for the ride but preferably not in the same vehicle as our heroes. This look very interesting and quite different and I'm looking forward to the story.
I'm along for the ride but preferably not in the same vehicle as our heroes. This look very interesting and quite different and I'm looking forward to the story.
178/7/2012 c1 trisha63
Oh Kate so nice to read from you again! I was missing an Angry Man, some kiind of bad and here you go and up and start a new one. Oh I love a good thriller full of action and intrigue, and some sexy men in uniforms cann't hurt either! LOL My first husband was a Marine and let me tell you that their dress blues are to die for! Sounds interesting so far and all the crew is present and accoutable for, with the exception of Bella, but I have a feeling she isn't to far behind them. Can not wait to see what happens next. Take care, Trisha :}
Oh Kate so nice to read from you again! I was missing an Angry Man, some kiind of bad and here you go and up and start a new one. Oh I love a good thriller full of action and intrigue, and some sexy men in uniforms cann't hurt either! LOL My first husband was a Marine and let me tell you that their dress blues are to die for! Sounds interesting so far and all the crew is present and accoutable for, with the exception of Bella, but I have a feeling she isn't to far behind them. Can not wait to see what happens next. Take care, Trisha :}