for OPERATION: Break the Dawn3/12/2024 c4 
2NKubie
Well, that's not good. I wonder if it was torture that got Riley to divulge more than he wanted. This is definitely NOT good!
I was Googling the weapons mentioned in the a/n. Hopefully, the cops have no reason to check my search history. Lol
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
2NKubieWell, that's not good. I wonder if it was torture that got Riley to divulge more than he wanted. This is definitely NOT good!
I was Googling the weapons mentioned in the a/n. Hopefully, the cops have no reason to check my search history. Lol
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/12/2024 c3 NKubie
I am SO glad that Bella can at least shoot. Obviously, she's not "The Cleaner," but she's not the helpless civilian they're all making her out to be either.
And these biological warfare viruses scare the shit out of me! Even if the one on the story isn't real, there's probably something similar out there ir in development. Eek!
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
I am SO glad that Bella can at least shoot. Obviously, she's not "The Cleaner," but she's not the helpless civilian they're all making her out to be either.
And these biological warfare viruses scare the shit out of me! Even if the one on the story isn't real, there's probably something similar out there ir in development. Eek!
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/11/2024 c2 NKubie
Even if XR5 doesn't exist, something similar probably will at sone point. Humans have no shortage of ways to destroy themselves.
I'm hoping even this Bella got some self-defense training by her cop father. Otherwise, it's gonna be even trickier keeping her safe.
And I want to reiterate how much I love that you gave Rose and Alice the expertise that they have. I'm excited for what's next!
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
Even if XR5 doesn't exist, something similar probably will at sone point. Humans have no shortage of ways to destroy themselves.
I'm hoping even this Bella got some self-defense training by her cop father. Otherwise, it's gonna be even trickier keeping her safe.
And I want to reiterate how much I love that you gave Rose and Alice the expertise that they have. I'm excited for what's next!
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
3/10/2024 c1 NKubie
I'm baaaack! ;)
In buckling up for what I can tell will be an exciting ride. Many thanks for making Rose and Alice kickaas and combat ready...again. Or maybe I should say before, since I'm reading your stories out of order. LOL
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
I'm baaaack! ;)
In buckling up for what I can tell will be an exciting ride. Many thanks for making Rose and Alice kickaas and combat ready...again. Or maybe I should say before, since I'm reading your stories out of order. LOL
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
12/30/2023 c26 Moltz
Did Edward anticipate his uncle, the General, recruiting Bella based on the reports of her bravery and decisive actions?
I’m looking forward to reading the continuation of this amazing group of soldiers as Bella integrates into their team.
Did Edward anticipate his uncle, the General, recruiting Bella based on the reports of her bravery and decisive actions?
I’m looking forward to reading the continuation of this amazing group of soldiers as Bella integrates into their team.
12/29/2023 c25 Moltz
When does Bella decide to join Carlisle’s team?
Will Edward be informed prior to her training?
When does Bella decide to join Carlisle’s team?
Will Edward be informed prior to her training?
12/29/2023 c24 Moltz
So the reason Alice isn’t being offered the promotion is because Edward refuses his promotion?
Rose is like the sister Edward doesn’t have. This group of misfits is closer than family.
So the reason Alice isn’t being offered the promotion is because Edward refuses his promotion?
Rose is like the sister Edward doesn’t have. This group of misfits is closer than family.
12/29/2023 c23 Moltz
I’m glad she didn’t go through Edward to kill James.
What are they going to do about the warheads?
I’m glad she didn’t go through Edward to kill James.
What are they going to do about the warheads?
12/29/2023 c22 Moltz
That’s an order…
I don’t know where she shot him but she needs to get him out of there and in a hospital.
That’s an order…
I don’t know where she shot him but she needs to get him out of there and in a hospital.
12/29/2023 c21 Moltz
Edward had better shred Mr. Spetsnaz top to bottom.
Will all the kidnapped technical people be recovered?
Does James find his end next chapter?
Edward had better shred Mr. Spetsnaz top to bottom.
Will all the kidnapped technical people be recovered?
Does James find his end next chapter?
12/28/2023 c20 Moltz
Is there someone in Washington giving Aro intelligence on this mission?
He seems eve two steps ahead of them and knows too much about Riley and Isabella.
I’m not sure Bella’s idea of waiting to set off her tracking device is a good idea.
Although she will learn more, the delay may cost her team in the end.
Is there someone in Washington giving Aro intelligence on this mission?
He seems eve two steps ahead of them and knows too much about Riley and Isabella.
I’m not sure Bella’s idea of waiting to set off her tracking device is a good idea.
Although she will learn more, the delay may cost her team in the end.
12/28/2023 c19 Moltz
How did James figure out where the Dr. was being kept?
And did he ascertain the plan of attack?
Are Paul and Embry okay? They were patrolling the perimeter.
Edward is going to be pissed, well, they all are.
How did James figure out where the Dr. was being kept?
And did he ascertain the plan of attack?
Are Paul and Embry okay? They were patrolling the perimeter.
Edward is going to be pissed, well, they all are.
12/28/2023 c18 Moltz
Edward has observed everything Bella said about Gunny and Bear-man but didn’t let it sink in how deeply they care for each other.
These two will have a unique relationship foundation when this mission ends and they go home.
But until then, I have a feeling that something is going to happen to Bella.
Edward has observed everything Bella said about Gunny and Bear-man but didn’t let it sink in how deeply they care for each other.
These two will have a unique relationship foundation when this mission ends and they go home.
But until then, I have a feeling that something is going to happen to Bella.
12/27/2023 c17 Moltz
James is a combat soldier of the most dangerous nature.
What is it that Dr. Swan knows that Aro is wanting?
Will that lab be destroyed?
James is a combat soldier of the most dangerous nature.
What is it that Dr. Swan knows that Aro is wanting?
Will that lab be destroyed?