
4/8/2020 c45 Almadynis Rayne
When Will said that line int eh first part of this chapter, I swear I was hearing the Viking funeral prayer. Awesome! Yes, I'm binging your fic. Congrats! I usually avoid any stories over 200k...I can't seem to stop reading yours. _
When Will said that line int eh first part of this chapter, I swear I was hearing the Viking funeral prayer. Awesome! Yes, I'm binging your fic. Congrats! I usually avoid any stories over 200k...I can't seem to stop reading yours. _
12/3/2019 c55
4Tsuna97
I really love this fanfiction. And this chapter was so adorable and sweet. You are really good at this! Keep up the good work!

I really love this fanfiction. And this chapter was so adorable and sweet. You are really good at this! Keep up the good work!
9/22/2019 c124 K-Dragon in Phoenix Flames
Ok. I think I know where you are planing to go with this with Toshinori's jealousy. But please, please please please. Put a line where you will begin IT and where IT will end because i had that happen to me and I REALLY do NOT wanna read it but i love this story so much.
Ok. I think I know where you are planing to go with this with Toshinori's jealousy. But please, please please please. Put a line where you will begin IT and where IT will end because i had that happen to me and I REALLY do NOT wanna read it but i love this story so much.
7/4/2019 c100 Guest
First off, this fic is amazing, I’ve read it countless times. I do have a few questions about this chapter though: One, wasn’t Jack riding with Bumblebee in the beginning? Two, why does Daniel’s nickname keep switching from Danno to Danny? Is it just a typo? Not a big deal of course, either one, it was just a little immersion breaking.
First off, this fic is amazing, I’ve read it countless times. I do have a few questions about this chapter though: One, wasn’t Jack riding with Bumblebee in the beginning? Two, why does Daniel’s nickname keep switching from Danno to Danny? Is it just a typo? Not a big deal of course, either one, it was just a little immersion breaking.
4/29/2019 c225
3LoveHopes
Wow... just wow. I powered through this story as fast as I could and it's perfect. This is everything I wanted and have been looking for. I love it. I love your OC characters, I love what you are doing with canon characters, I love your writing, I love all your little moments and the slow build of all the different plot and what you've done with everything. I just, I love it. So much. Everything.

Wow... just wow. I powered through this story as fast as I could and it's perfect. This is everything I wanted and have been looking for. I love it. I love your OC characters, I love what you are doing with canon characters, I love your writing, I love all your little moments and the slow build of all the different plot and what you've done with everything. I just, I love it. So much. Everything.
4/11/2019 c222 reptoholic
great job explaining it. Hope to see Kae have an update of some kind. New weapon? Really hope the Dino's Come into this, love those Ancients
great job explaining it. Hope to see Kae have an update of some kind. New weapon? Really hope the Dino's Come into this, love those Ancients