
8/9/2012 c12
27Pokefan291
That beginning of this chapter made my heart stopped. This was in MK8, right? I thought it was going to turn out the same but I'm just really glad everything turned out alright. So happy for Tenma that I'm crying tears of joy. I feel bad for him because he moved around a lot. Oh, love Tsunami's part! I just love everything about it! Can't wait for more!

That beginning of this chapter made my heart stopped. This was in MK8, right? I thought it was going to turn out the same but I'm just really glad everything turned out alright. So happy for Tenma that I'm crying tears of joy. I feel bad for him because he moved around a lot. Oh, love Tsunami's part! I just love everything about it! Can't wait for more!
8/8/2012 c1
4Era-Basilisk
lol, the moment I realized the rat was named Hikari...I'm starting to wonder if this story revolves around the rat XD

lol, the moment I realized the rat was named Hikari...I'm starting to wonder if this story revolves around the rat XD
8/8/2012 c1
27Pokefan291
So cute! Kariya is just too funny and Tenma and Hikaru are cute. Poor Tsurugi. Love it"

So cute! Kariya is just too funny and Tenma and Hikaru are cute. Poor Tsurugi. Love it"
8/8/2012 c1
28Draco de Laviathan
KAWAII.
I LIKE HIKARI.
Lol Tsurugi, you don't need to be that angry... 8D
Update soon!

KAWAII.
I LIKE HIKARI.
Lol Tsurugi, you don't need to be that angry... 8D
Update soon!
8/8/2012 c1
34Floric1434
asdfghjkl; omg this was just so cute I couldn't stop laughing like a dweeb XD I loved this!

asdfghjkl; omg this was just so cute I couldn't stop laughing like a dweeb XD I loved this!