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11/3/2019 c11 YukinaBlueRose
Um, okay, a couple things.
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The story felt more and more rushed the closer you got to the end.
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What happened to Jazz (Jasmine), Danny's big sister? I mean, I know she died when the others did (along with Mr. Lancer, who you also never mentioned) but you never mentioned her even ONCE. Not when the Doctor was telling Danny about those that didn't make it, or when Danny was telling the Titans about the people he'd lost.
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Other than those, it was a really good story!
It's kinda sad that it was so rushed, because it had the potential to be a GREAT story!
11/3/2019 c7 YukinaBlueRose
So cute! O:D
4/1/2019 c6 Lol sry
as soon as I saw the "trouble at the warehouse", I was like "Heck yeah, Boxy!"
12/31/2018 c5 Teacuplevi
Love the story, still hate Danielle though.
8/30/2018 c11 Tyrone666
Loved it please continue
7/30/2017 c7 1Panther4Life
Cu vi parolas Esperanto? (Do you speak Esperanto) Just curious, I actually got in to DP when I heard Wulf only spoke Esperanto.
3/20/2017 c4 2Killua Lawliet
Great story nice touch with the name Thantos, also(now I'm not shure this was your intention but) the greek god of death(not the underworld that's Hades) is Thanatos (witch of course the name Thantos makes me think of saying as Thanatos is derived from Thantos) and in this story Danny/Ryan/Thantos is the king of ghosts so they are kinda similar so I was wondering did you pick the name just 'cause it means death or did you do it thinking it kinda ties in with the whole king of ghosts what with Thantos and Thanatos being very similar or am I just reading way to much into the name
3/20/2017 c3 Killua Lawliet
VIVA LA REVOLUTION!, Danni with an i, and Cujo
1/2/2017 c11 1buterflypuss
good story
10/14/2016 c11 12Crystalzap
pretty cool, I always like the whole Danny is the new Ghost King I mean that is wow it usually happens when you defeat a king you become the new one. I think he would also make a good ambassador between the human and the ghost as he is part of both worlds.
9/17/2016 c1 Rachel
I couldn't even get passed the first sentence. "Danny woke awake." The first sentence and you already lost a reader.
9/15/2016 c1 Krusher
Danny's outfit just ruined it for me. I won't be able to take him seriously when I imagine him in that getup.
8/20/2016 c11 3LiteratureGirl12
This was a very nice little story :)
8/20/2016 c1 LiteratureGirl12
Cujo? The pet better be Cujo.
7/27/2016 c11 3BBCDP2
hey just wanted to let you know that i highly enjoyed your story. -i like when my favorite character knows everything and has to catch everybody up to speed :D
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