for What began at Dimhollow2/24/2015 c1 Catwith777
This thing last was updated 3 years ago. I doubt it will be finished. I hope it will though!
This thing last was updated 3 years ago. I doubt it will be finished. I hope it will though!
3/10/2014 c1 Guest
Continue!
Continue!
12/16/2012 c1 Onsholo
This looks like has a lot of potential,personally i loved dawnguard plot expecially Serana story so yeah i do belive that this will be a awesome fanfic
This looks like has a lot of potential,personally i loved dawnguard plot expecially Serana story so yeah i do belive that this will be a awesome fanfic
11/21/2012 c1 TaylorLoe
A good first chapter I hope you choose to continue the story. I like the way you change the dialogue a bit but still manage to stick to the main story line. I hope you keep writing so that I can keep reading!
A good first chapter I hope you choose to continue the story. I like the way you change the dialogue a bit but still manage to stick to the main story line. I hope you keep writing so that I can keep reading!
11/1/2012 c1 Sapienti
This has definitely caught my attention. I love the idea that you're doing a novelization of dawnguard. What I really like is that this dragonborn is just a regular member of the Companions/College, most skyrim fanfictions always portray their dragonborn as mary sues and gary stus with them being the head of every guild in skyrim, it's just a bad way to portray the main character. Anyway, last point is that I really hope that you'll keep your dragonborn neutral in the civil war (i'm sick of imperial this or stormcloak that) or better yet, only focus on the dawnguard questline. You should also be careful with the romance, like don't introduce it too soon or too late in the story, dragonborn is lonely and needs some proper lovin :D. You probably already had these points in mind, but this story shows promise and I would hope that you will continue to write with "finesse" and update this story regularly.
This has definitely caught my attention. I love the idea that you're doing a novelization of dawnguard. What I really like is that this dragonborn is just a regular member of the Companions/College, most skyrim fanfictions always portray their dragonborn as mary sues and gary stus with them being the head of every guild in skyrim, it's just a bad way to portray the main character. Anyway, last point is that I really hope that you'll keep your dragonborn neutral in the civil war (i'm sick of imperial this or stormcloak that) or better yet, only focus on the dawnguard questline. You should also be careful with the romance, like don't introduce it too soon or too late in the story, dragonborn is lonely and needs some proper lovin :D. You probably already had these points in mind, but this story shows promise and I would hope that you will continue to write with "finesse" and update this story regularly.
9/16/2012 c1 exiled-druid
interesting. liked how you reworded a good bit of the story. that'll help in the long run. don't be afraid to keep working in changes like you've already done (dialogue and such).
interesting. liked how you reworded a good bit of the story. that'll help in the long run. don't be afraid to keep working in changes like you've already done (dialogue and such).
8/27/2012 c1 Guest
Dont stop Really Good
Dont stop Really Good
8/23/2012 c1 human being
I really like it. Please continue!
I really like it. Please continue!
8/12/2012 c1 Anon
Great story! I would love to read more of this. Love your style!
Great story! I would love to read more of this. Love your style!
8/10/2012 c1 
9Xcalated
I like your story! I like how you're telling the events of Dawnguard and I like the way you have the Dragonborn and Serana interact. I think that you should definitely continue the story and keep writing
9XcalatedI like your story! I like how you're telling the events of Dawnguard and I like the way you have the Dragonborn and Serana interact. I think that you should definitely continue the story and keep writing
8/10/2012 c1 aaa
Good story, but you need to capitalize the undercase 'i' that you keep doing. It's terrible grammar.
Good story, but you need to capitalize the undercase 'i' that you keep doing. It's terrible grammar.
8/10/2012 c1 Andrew
Very NICE!
Very NICE!