for What began at Dimhollow8/10/2012 c1 T-B-R
Awesome first chapter, Well written so far, and the dialogue is a bit unique comared to canon responses, so keep it coming.
Awesome first chapter, Well written so far, and the dialogue is a bit unique comared to canon responses, so keep it coming.
8/9/2012 c1 
12kiwipixel77
Good start to a story so far. I like it. I think there's not enough SeranaxDragonborn fics on here, so I'm excited to see a new one. You have a few minor spelling and grammatical mistakes, but nothing too serious. Please continue!
12kiwipixel77Good start to a story so far. I like it. I think there's not enough SeranaxDragonborn fics on here, so I'm excited to see a new one. You have a few minor spelling and grammatical mistakes, but nothing too serious. Please continue!
8/9/2012 c1 5Warmaster Tzeentch
This is good few grammer and spelling errors I like it. And I can't wait for him to fill Serana ib on what she's missed. And it looks like he is sliding towards the empire.
5Warmaster TzeentchThis is good few grammer and spelling errors I like it. And I can't wait for him to fill Serana ib on what she's missed. And it looks like he is sliding towards the empire.