
6/2 c10 Ian Brooks
from my reading of this chapter three words discribe the way the next chapters wil, go for naruto.
naruto:It Is On!
from my reading of this chapter three words discribe the way the next chapters wil, go for naruto.
naruto:It Is On!
6/2 c8 Ian Brooks
you mean tristan and isolde
you mean tristan and isolde
1/6/2019 c1 Guest
An incredibly weak start. The whole introduction to the plot is terribly flawed. She won't accept a guard under even her boss's command? And he just agrees with it? She's just the double of someone actually important. Now they give away one of their strongest, most expensive weapons to someone not on their side just to satisfy the whims of some annoying little girl who could have easily been talked down.
When the foundation is poor, everything else feels shaky.
An incredibly weak start. The whole introduction to the plot is terribly flawed. She won't accept a guard under even her boss's command? And he just agrees with it? She's just the double of someone actually important. Now they give away one of their strongest, most expensive weapons to someone not on their side just to satisfy the whims of some annoying little girl who could have easily been talked down.
When the foundation is poor, everything else feels shaky.
7/19/2018 c8 YeTianshi
Lol, that moment you accidentally piss off the father of the girl you're dating xD
Lol, that moment you accidentally piss off the father of the girl you're dating xD
7/19/2018 c6 YeTianshi
For someone that's basically ancient, Naruto seems to be manipulated a bit too easily, don't you think?
Still it was a nice chapter, though I really didn't like how both Meer and Talia decided to emotionally manipulate Naruto to get what they or someone else wanted.
For someone that's basically ancient, Naruto seems to be manipulated a bit too easily, don't you think?
Still it was a nice chapter, though I really didn't like how both Meer and Talia decided to emotionally manipulate Naruto to get what they or someone else wanted.
11/20/2017 c2
6Primus2021
I vote the Gaea Gundam Kyuubi.
and for the Harem. Meer, Shiho, Luna and Mayrin at the least.

I vote the Gaea Gundam Kyuubi.
and for the Harem. Meer, Shiho, Luna and Mayrin at the least.
5/28/2017 c10 Guest
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