6/30/2023 c11 3LordHadesinTartarus
So the whole Lucius scene really bothers me on a number of levels. It doesn't make sense from a realistic perspective (not that any of this does, you very clearly have no concept whatsoever of how abused children behave and how abuse shapes their personality, either that or this is attempting to convey some sort of bizarre religious message), people don't volunteer to get hurt - doesn't matter if it's in fantasy or not, if a person has free will they will not seek out pain (outside of kinky situations that is, but that's a whole other kettle of fish). It also doesn't make sense from a story perspective; it didn't contribute anything to the story and is something of a plot hole. I've read this whole story before (or at least the 39 or 40 chapters that existed before it was recently updated), but as I reread it I'm bothered more and more by the premise (this perfect, unflinchingly kind overly mature caricature of a character - it reads more like someone trying to write a strange hybrid Superman/Jesus character, but without any of the inherent flaws) and the litany of typos littered throughout.

6/2/2023 c35 atymer
Yesssss!

3/30/2023 c40 zarkan
Not bad really not bad I like it so please update soon see ya

3/3/2023 c30 Guest
Traaaaaaash

3/2/2023 c11 Guest
Haha what a bunch of retarded melodramatic shit xD

1/3/2023 c1 Shannon McHale Lowe
I love this story! The character development is awesome. <3 there were some passages when Harry was using Pandora’s box that really resonated with me. I actually took a screenshot and saved itI’m really looking forward to reading your upcoming work!

12/11/2022 c40 Samdra
Welcome back and thank you for the new chapter. This one is rather short and obviously a lead up to something. I'm looking forward to finding out what.