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12/23/2012 c4 3Just another ginge
This story is awesome, i love it! Its much better than alot of "harry gets away from the dursleys" fics. Its very origional, i love it! More asap please! :D
10/27/2012 c3 09543
I really liked this, your Harry is really well written, and it flows nicely. But I can't believe that Dumbledore would just let Harry live on his own. He's just a little boy! Is he going to get a guardian for him?
8/17/2012 c3 Felius
If Harry gets any nicer he is going to need the old Disney Princess treatment. :P

Seriously though, the story is pretty good, tug the heart strings pretty decently. I look forward reading more and I can just imagine his interactions with future characters, specially those who had a problem with him in Canon.
8/17/2012 c3 Bornfromtheashes
I love the humility and compassion your showing in Harry's character. Please keep the chapters coming!
8/17/2012 c3 Awww
This story is so incredibly cute! I love how selfless and helpful and all around amazingly kind Harry is. Update soon please? Pleaaaaaase?
8/17/2012 c3 katenkapotter
aww harry is such a sweetie, nice dumbledore though a bit irresponsible then again his first attempt at a foster family for harry was a disaster. nice story and i look forward to more
8/17/2012 c3 2Treebrooke
Awesome story. I love it. Just watch out for making Harry a Gary Stu, not that I think you will but it's a possibility if his current personality is handled the wrong way. It's really an awesome story though I can't wait for more chapters!
8/12/2012 c2 10This Star Won't Go Out
this is so good nearly made me cry Harry is so sweet
8/12/2012 c2 Guest
I LOVE this story! Heart wrenching. You're doing an awesome job, I can't wait for the next chapter:)
8/12/2012 c2 64dancer4813
Love it! :) Harry is just so sweet with Riley! :D Great story!
8/10/2012 c1 Lotta
Wow, really interesting start, and despite you being a "novice writer", you seem to be able to write much better than many other people here;)
I look forward to future chapters!
8/10/2012 c1 10This Star Won't Go Out
wow very good emotional and well written
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