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8/17/2013 c29 7LovingBOBThePacific
Honey, first of all. Don't thank me for supporting you, because that's just what best friends do. Support each other no matter what! :3 I love you, darling!

This chapter was beautifully written, and I beamed all the way through. These guys and their story will always have a special place in my heart. They brought us together. Hopefully we'll be able to thank them one day.
Love you!

Camz xxx
7/30/2013 c28 3ChocAndSnow19
Now, this was amazing! I can't quite decide which part I liked the most. But, I can say this: your way of describing Lottie's surroundings (as well as her thoughts) is really impressive. :)
I'm a bit surprised that she agreed on Nixon's idea regarding Alfie. That choice definitely wasn't easy for her... I just hope that Alfie will be okay in the end.

By the way, thank you for reading my story! It would be really nice to hear from you again. :)

Have a nice trip! :)
7/30/2013 c28 PineStar101
Ok... You probably think I'm a weirdo now...

Every time I go to scoll down and continue writing my review, the button to post the review stays in the centre of the screen and henceforth I keep on tapping it like an idiot as I scoll down...

This is one of the most ridiculous things that has happened to me... actually I'm laughing my head off right now but on with what I was TRYING to say:

One of the finest (and definitely favourite) BoB FanFics I have read and I love the way you have designed the story ( not to cheesy, and whilst you might think you being dramatic is different/odd, it is really good to read because of the emotions it adds to the story).

Keep writing, and know that this lil ole girl is hanging on to your every word... ( Or should that be Chapter?!...

PineStar101
7/30/2013 c28 PineStar101
Lol! Sorry I didn't finish the last post but I kinda had an accident and hit the review button early (I use my iPod to read FanFiction)...

Anyways... What I was saying was honestly this is one of the finest (And definitely favourite
7/30/2013 c28 PineStar101
OMG!

So happy that you added the next chapter, the suspense was killing me and can I say you nailed it... Still one of my favourite BoB FanFiction stories to date. I love the way you are showing the emotional side to Lottie, it really gives a realistic feeling to the story in the way you show her heartbreak (and tolerance ) of her father returning.

You're probably wondering why I never have anything negative to say for your story, but that's because HONESTLY (emphasis on the honest lol) this is one of the finest (and definitely favourite
7/30/2013 c28 7LovingBOBThePacific
Aw, Becca! :3 Have I ever told you that I love you?!
You're very welcome! It's weird, isn't it? How much we both connect to the characters? :')
Fantastic chapter, hun, and you finally got it written down, hopefully the way you wanted :)
Talk to you soon and happy week long fishing trip with your Dad - have fun!:)
-Jeg elsker dig!
-Camz xx
7/14/2013 c27 PineStar101
Hey there! (Ok that was random I know)
Lovin the story HEAPS, I started reading it months ago but it hadn't been updated in a while so I was sad... But now you've started writing again and I'm ECSTATIC! Lol.. Just to let you know I am loving the work you do and PLEASE keep the chapters coming, I swear I hang on the edge of my seat until each new chapter comes out and it gets me so excited when I hop on and see the number of chapters has gone up! Looking forward to chapter 28, the hint you dropped about the "Boys taking care of Boones Dad" has got me curious and waiting like a sad desperado for more!
Until then, let me assure you ... Great job on this story!

P.S. The other day I read your other BoB
story, Heart Of A Soldier and can I say, whilst I do not love it as much as I love this story , it was amazing and a REALLY good fanfiction. Great job dude!

Thanks;)
7/12/2013 c27 Anonymous Review
Vintage Cow Girl - I have been keeping up with your story ever since you posted the first chapter, but it is only this one that has prompted me to write a review. Now, I want you to understand that I know you have respect for these men. They were real people, teenagers and young men with lives that could have been spent just being kids and doing things they loved. But they volunteered their lives and gave up everything for their country. You have a deep admiration for that. I can feel it when you write, literally feel it. I get it. I do. Anyway, back to what I was saying, and I will try my best to not make this sound like a furious accusation or simply a hateful comment. Bull (in "Breathe Me" only) is very out of character. I do not believe for a second, having watched how he was portrayed in Band of Brothers, that he would shoot a man in the middle of an aid station filled with soldiers who are either dead, dying or in extreme amounts of pain. Do you remember the episode when the drunk GI shot Sergeant Grant? And how he was brought back to Easy's headquarters and beaten on by the guys, then Speirs showed up and pointed that gun at him, and everyone stepped back like they were saying, "Whoa, we weren't even thinking of this." Because, and I think Speirs may have had the same idea in mind, who would want to take a life away so quickly? Speirs wanted him to suffer like Grant was suffering, not give him a quick way out. And that's the only problem I had with the scene in Chapter 27, because I firmly believe Bull would have wanted the same thing. Other than that, Loretta was strong and brave and beautiful and the most courageous (and not in the least bit a Mary Sue) woman ever. So, in conclusion, all I am asking is that you keep these amazing men in character and please, please don't make them do things just because Loretta is female. I'll also play devil's advocate and say that she probably would punch somebody in the jaw if they tried anything, like Doc said. Okay. That pretty much sum up my rant thing. I cannot wait to read what's next. Good luck. God bless, and Currahee.
7/11/2013 c27 3ChocAndSnow19
Goodness gracious... Lottie's encounter with her father was so moving... and frightening. As I read it, I was surprised, terrified and I felt so sorry for her in the same time. You did a brilliant job in writing this chapter! :)

I liked Bull's POV, as well. It was really sweet to hear how much he cares for Lottie, in spite of everything. She will need his support, especially in these tough times. It was also nice to see Gene happy while talking to Renee. :) But, when I remembered what happened in the end, I already felt a bit sad...

As for the next chapter, I can hardly wait to find out what happens. Have a lovely day! :)
7/11/2013 c22 PineStar101
Loving the story HEAPS keep it comin'!
7/11/2013 c27 7LovingBOBThePacific
O.M.G. You weren't kidding around when you said there would be drama. Fantastic chapter hun! :D
-Our past can boil things up in us when we least expect it :O Poor Lottie...
AAAAW Gene :3

-Camz xxx
7/8/2013 c26 3ChocAndSnow19
Oh, poor Loretta... at one point, I got really worried for her. The guys shouldn't have talked about her like that, especially after all she had been through... By the way, it was really sweet to see Bull and her together at the end of the chapter. I hope that their story will have a happy ending :)
I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!

P. S. Thank you for adding the lyrics at the beginning! :)
7/6/2013 c26 7LovingBOBThePacific
Fantastic chap, hun! Though, some of the men are quite unpopular with me now ;) Haha, please update soon! This chap gave me chills!
-Camilla
7/5/2013 c6 2DeansRightShoe
squeeeeeeeeeeeee just about any time I read about Bull and his adorable southern-ness I just can't-! *giggles like deranged schoolgirl*
6/29/2013 c25 3ChocAndSnow19
Oh, my... what a drama! The part with Lottie trying to help Alfie was so moving! I was really touched when he called her 'momma'. :) I hope he'll be okay, after everything that happened.
Anyway, I have to admit... this chapter reminded me of a song I like to listen to:

"When it was dark, now there's light
Where that was pain, now there's joy
Where there was weakness I found my strength
All in the eyes of a boy..."
(Celine Dion, "A New Day Has Come")

This almost looks like Lottie and Alfie, doesn't it? ;)
Keep up the good work and have a lovely day! :)
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