for She Wrote a Book About Brothers9/23/2012 c6 
7LovingBOBThePacific
I loved this, hun!
Every word, paragraph - damn girly! :D
Hmm, I sense the Joe Toye scene was thought for someone to smile widely while giggling like a silly school girl, eh? ;)
However, I loved this and I love THIS STORY! Please update ASAP
Btw. check your FB if you don't check there first when you wake up - I wanna show you something :)
Much love,
-Camz
7LovingBOBThePacificI loved this, hun!
Every word, paragraph - damn girly! :D
Hmm, I sense the Joe Toye scene was thought for someone to smile widely while giggling like a silly school girl, eh? ;)
However, I loved this and I love THIS STORY! Please update ASAP
Btw. check your FB if you don't check there first when you wake up - I wanna show you something :)
Much love,
-Camz
9/20/2012 c5 2lalkness
I am in love with this! Bull doesn't get enough love and as always I love me some Roe! I like how you keep Loretta still a girl. Alot of O.C.s are overly tough and tend to out performance the men. I like that she isn't weak but she isn't the best yet. Can't wait to read more!
2lalknessI am in love with this! Bull doesn't get enough love and as always I love me some Roe! I like how you keep Loretta still a girl. Alot of O.C.s are overly tough and tend to out performance the men. I like that she isn't weak but she isn't the best yet. Can't wait to read more!
9/14/2012 c5 7LittleMissYorkie
Ohhh! So glad you updated! I've been waiting ages for some little hint of Bull-mance :)! can't wait to read more!
7LittleMissYorkieOhhh! So glad you updated! I've been waiting ages for some little hint of Bull-mance :)! can't wait to read more!
9/13/2012 c5 7LovingBOBThePacific
So great to read something from you again, hun!
Great chap and it's so good to read something of yours when you're sick (yes, I've become sick too, a day before I'm heading to a tournament :/)
I hope you'll get better soon and those knees of yours are going to be all right :')
Update ASAP!
Much love headed your way,
-Camilla
7LovingBOBThePacificSo great to read something from you again, hun!
Great chap and it's so good to read something of yours when you're sick (yes, I've become sick too, a day before I'm heading to a tournament :/)
I hope you'll get better soon and those knees of yours are going to be all right :')
Update ASAP!
Much love headed your way,
-Camilla
9/13/2012 c5 46wandertogondor
Wow! This was a great chapter! You've kept it so real...I'm not sure if I have the right words to elaborate. You have side a wide scope of discriptive words and I can imagine everything that's going on! Maybe you could make better transitions when they're on different courses. Other than that, keep up the great work!
46wandertogondorWow! This was a great chapter! You've kept it so real...I'm not sure if I have the right words to elaborate. You have side a wide scope of discriptive words and I can imagine everything that's going on! Maybe you could make better transitions when they're on different courses. Other than that, keep up the great work!
9/6/2012 c4 wandertogondor
I love how real Loretta is! It's not written as if she's like super-human or something and I can't explain how great that it! Keep up the great work! I NEED the next chapter soon :)
I love how real Loretta is! It's not written as if she's like super-human or something and I can't explain how great that it! Keep up the great work! I NEED the next chapter soon :)
9/6/2012 c4 7LovingBOBThePacific
Not rubbish or anything like that at all! I love how you treat the characters, hun - fantastic job! :)
Please update ASAP! :-*
Yours,
-Camilla
7LovingBOBThePacificNot rubbish or anything like that at all! I love how you treat the characters, hun - fantastic job! :)
Please update ASAP! :-*
Yours,
-Camilla
8/27/2012 c3 46wandertogondor
Wow, this was amazing! Actaully, Sobel was the weakling-he could barely do twenty push-ups. Though he was hard on the men he came off to be an a-hole in the show though...
I loved what you've done here! Hope you had a wonderful brithday :)
46wandertogondorWow, this was amazing! Actaully, Sobel was the weakling-he could barely do twenty push-ups. Though he was hard on the men he came off to be an a-hole in the show though...
I loved what you've done here! Hope you had a wonderful brithday :)
8/26/2012 c3 readxme
Yay! You updated! Really enjoyed this chapter! Happy Birthday! :))) Can't wait for the surprise! xxx
Yay! You updated! Really enjoyed this chapter! Happy Birthday! :))) Can't wait for the surprise! xxx
8/25/2012 c3 7LovingBOBThePacific
Loved it, loved it, I loved it! That's really all I can say :D
I love you, Becca and Happy 15th Birthday again again :')
I miss you like hell!
-Camz
XXX
7LovingBOBThePacificLoved it, loved it, I loved it! That's really all I can say :D
I love you, Becca and Happy 15th Birthday again again :')
I miss you like hell!
-Camz
XXX
8/25/2012 c3 7LittleMissYorkie
I love this chapter! I was so excited to see you put bull on there! :) i love bull, and i'm a big fan of cudlitz and his dale dye impression. bull is so underrated! need more bull!
great job, can't wait to see what happens next! i hope she doesn't get kicked out!
keep up the good work! :)
7LittleMissYorkieI love this chapter! I was so excited to see you put bull on there! :) i love bull, and i'm a big fan of cudlitz and his dale dye impression. bull is so underrated! need more bull!
great job, can't wait to see what happens next! i hope she doesn't get kicked out!
keep up the good work! :)
8/22/2012 c2 readxme
What a great start! :) Defintely Doc Roe! :))) Or maybe Webster or Nixon. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D x
What a great start! :) Defintely Doc Roe! :))) Or maybe Webster or Nixon. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D x
8/21/2012 c2 Me
Agh! I love this; it's so original. Update, yeah?
Hmm... Love interest should definitely be Roe... or Shifty, but I like Roe better. :)
Agh! I love this; it's so original. Update, yeah?
Hmm... Love interest should definitely be Roe... or Shifty, but I like Roe better. :)
8/20/2012 c2 4eurogirl14
I'm liking where this story is going so far! As for love interests, I'm thinking either Roe, Winters, Lipton, or Speirs. Then again, my next choices would be Guarnere or Toye. They and Nixon are my favorites, but so far, she seems to need someone playful, serious, and prtective wrapped all into one. Can't wait for the next chapter!
4eurogirl14I'm liking where this story is going so far! As for love interests, I'm thinking either Roe, Winters, Lipton, or Speirs. Then again, my next choices would be Guarnere or Toye. They and Nixon are my favorites, but so far, she seems to need someone playful, serious, and prtective wrapped all into one. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/20/2012 c2 horselover
Personally, I want the love interest to be Toye. He doesn't really have any love stories written about him. It's almost tragic. I also think Shifty and Roe should be her best friends. They are very gentle and I think that's what she needs right now after escaping from her father's abuse. Someone gentle who is not going to push her around.
Personally, I want the love interest to be Toye. He doesn't really have any love stories written about him. It's almost tragic. I also think Shifty and Roe should be her best friends. They are very gentle and I think that's what she needs right now after escaping from her father's abuse. Someone gentle who is not going to push her around.