for Countdown6/15/2014 c1 DeletedAccount3498
Nice. This was a deep and revealing one-shot into Clove's head. You have her toughness, her thoughts and brutality brought out well. These were my favourite lines:
'Mercy is pity, and I don't pity Cato.'
'If someone kills him, it should be me.'
'I want to die looking into the face of someone who deserves to win.'
'We are the same that way, he and I.'
'Because until I have to worry about honor, respect and breaking alliances, I'm going to enjoy this. I've been molded my whole life for this purpose. There will be blood today, and with any luck, most of it will be on my hands'.
I can't wait to see the other countdowns, and even though you might not be updating this anymore, will you consider it for me?
xx
HybridsRose
Nice. This was a deep and revealing one-shot into Clove's head. You have her toughness, her thoughts and brutality brought out well. These were my favourite lines:
'Mercy is pity, and I don't pity Cato.'
'If someone kills him, it should be me.'
'I want to die looking into the face of someone who deserves to win.'
'We are the same that way, he and I.'
'Because until I have to worry about honor, respect and breaking alliances, I'm going to enjoy this. I've been molded my whole life for this purpose. There will be blood today, and with any luck, most of it will be on my hands'.
I can't wait to see the other countdowns, and even though you might not be updating this anymore, will you consider it for me?
xx
HybridsRose
12/26/2012 c1 010127
" If I'm defeated, I want to die looking into the face of someone who deserves to win."- great line.
" If I'm defeated, I want to die looking into the face of someone who deserves to win."- great line.
8/11/2012 c1 
5Pinkbookworm7
This was great! You should do a series of one-shots like this, about what different tributes are thinking during the countdown.
5Pinkbookworm7This was great! You should do a series of one-shots like this, about what different tributes are thinking during the countdown.
8/10/2012 c1 5gxio
This is seriously really good! You portray Clove's character perfectly, and you have excellent writing skills! You have perfect grammar. This oneshot is PERFECT. Keep writing! :) -Brit
5gxioThis is seriously really good! You portray Clove's character perfectly, and you have excellent writing skills! You have perfect grammar. This oneshot is PERFECT. Keep writing! :) -Brit
8/10/2012 c1 this-profile-deactivated
Wow, I think this is well written and interesting. I can totally see Clove this way.
Wow, I think this is well written and interesting. I can totally see Clove this way.