for Hogwarts School for Magical Beings11/11/2012 c4 huhu
add hedwig to the harem it would be cute/awesome
add hedwig to the harem it would be cute/awesome
11/11/2012 c1 Guest
hope you update this one soon, really great
hope you update this one soon, really great
11/7/2012 c4 
1icarus923
Found this more interesting than what I thought it would be. Hope you update soon!
1icarus923Found this more interesting than what I thought it would be. Hope you update soon!
11/7/2012 c4 selthar
great story so far... I love how you've done the whole creature setup, especially with Lily 'Tinkerbell' Evans {:-)
oh, and the varied spell foci? excellent, and Hermione's is especially fitting...
great story so far... I love how you've done the whole creature setup, especially with Lily 'Tinkerbell' Evans {:-)
oh, and the varied spell foci? excellent, and Hermione's is especially fitting...
10/23/2012 c4 8JordanMathias
Incredible little idea, and I'd like to see hedwig added to his love fest.
8JordanMathiasIncredible little idea, and I'd like to see hedwig added to his love fest.
10/21/2012 c4 Lavick Vell
Finally got some time to read both your updates, I really enjoyed this chapter. I was kinda expecting Hermione's parents to be Stalkers after you told me they were human, especially when thinking about all those weird scars they both had. I'm glad Hedwig got some screen time as well, I think she's probably my favorite character so far.
I also saw the note you put up on your profile page. It sounds like you're even busier than I am so I wont give you grief for taking some time off. I hope you get a chance to get some writing in again soon though, because I absolutely love both your HP stories.
Finally got some time to read both your updates, I really enjoyed this chapter. I was kinda expecting Hermione's parents to be Stalkers after you told me they were human, especially when thinking about all those weird scars they both had. I'm glad Hedwig got some screen time as well, I think she's probably my favorite character so far.
I also saw the note you put up on your profile page. It sounds like you're even busier than I am so I wont give you grief for taking some time off. I hope you get a chance to get some writing in again soon though, because I absolutely love both your HP stories.
10/19/2012 c4 kinglumption
The world you have made using JK material as a bare skeleton is amazing, the detail is precise let not overbearing and the feel of magic makes it feel like a magical world which JK reached with her first books let failed to truly grasp in the end, good luck with this novel and i will take great enjoyment reading this
The world you have made using JK material as a bare skeleton is amazing, the detail is precise let not overbearing and the feel of magic makes it feel like a magical world which JK reached with her first books let failed to truly grasp in the end, good luck with this novel and i will take great enjoyment reading this
10/18/2012 c4 jamie.maike
Great story so far. Great idea with having other magical creatures at Hogwarts. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Great story so far. Great idea with having other magical creatures at Hogwarts. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
10/15/2012 c4 S.R.B.T
Just read the three stories, (I.D.C.:L.T./S.S.C./H.S.F.M.B.) and they rule, eagerly await the update.
S.R.B.T.
Just read the three stories, (I.D.C.:L.T./S.S.C./H.S.F.M.B.) and they rule, eagerly await the update.
S.R.B.T.
10/7/2012 c4 10ssjgokillo
Dang, not sure how I missed this gem. Very interesting story premise you've got here, and its awesome to see a magical world that's so familiar and yet so vastly different from what we know. Loving the creature stuff, and the magical foci idea. And Lily and Hedwig are just adorable in this.
As far as pairings go, I voted for Hedwig but I would also like to see any of the other girls in the poll in the Harem. Especially Fem Blaise or Su Li.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
10ssjgokilloDang, not sure how I missed this gem. Very interesting story premise you've got here, and its awesome to see a magical world that's so familiar and yet so vastly different from what we know. Loving the creature stuff, and the magical foci idea. And Lily and Hedwig are just adorable in this.
As far as pairings go, I voted for Hedwig but I would also like to see any of the other girls in the poll in the Harem. Especially Fem Blaise or Su Li.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/5/2012 c4 Akuma-Heika
Not that I dislike Harmonie bit with you limiting it too one more girl in the harem I would prefer canon route of best friends opening another slot for someone else. Also since he is starting a species for the sake of making sure it survives wouldn't it be prudent for him to take more than 3 or 4 wives? So few nearly guarantees a second coming of the Bones end. Even if his kids and theirs also take a few wives each; one war would be more than enough to end the Dark Elves.
someone being good and evil at the same time, to attempt to lite a fire at the bottom of the ocean, to give birth while being a virgin - it was simply impossible.
All of these are possible. With the tight conditions. A flammable compound for the ocean. All men are good and evil there is no escaping that fact, the difference is what they give into to. A women could get pregnant in vitro and thus be a virgin and if done in a certain manner their hymen could be left intact. And for christians mary's Immaculate birthing is fact I was just giving example's for purely human ways of doing it. For the fire in ocean thermite would work. atomic bomb as well though that wouldn't quite be burning...outside of burnt water anyway lol. You went over all this a few sentences later lol. Oh well might as well keep it.
Not that I dislike Harmonie bit with you limiting it too one more girl in the harem I would prefer canon route of best friends opening another slot for someone else. Also since he is starting a species for the sake of making sure it survives wouldn't it be prudent for him to take more than 3 or 4 wives? So few nearly guarantees a second coming of the Bones end. Even if his kids and theirs also take a few wives each; one war would be more than enough to end the Dark Elves.
someone being good and evil at the same time, to attempt to lite a fire at the bottom of the ocean, to give birth while being a virgin - it was simply impossible.
All of these are possible. With the tight conditions. A flammable compound for the ocean. All men are good and evil there is no escaping that fact, the difference is what they give into to. A women could get pregnant in vitro and thus be a virgin and if done in a certain manner their hymen could be left intact. And for christians mary's Immaculate birthing is fact I was just giving example's for purely human ways of doing it. For the fire in ocean thermite would work. atomic bomb as well though that wouldn't quite be burning...outside of burnt water anyway lol. You went over all this a few sentences later lol. Oh well might as well keep it.